Comments on: The Vanquishing

By: Aca

Aca — Wed, 11 Mar 2009 19:09:37 +0000

This is beautiful.It sounds so olden timed.I love it.

Stephanie Moore — Tue, 27 Jan 2009 17:12:34 +0000

This sonnet is almost like a prayer. I love the ancient style of it. It’s a poem I’d like to read over and over to see what else it’s about.

nutuba — Tue, 20 Jan 2009 21:44:20 +0000

Beautiful! Nicely done.

Morgana — Sun, 18 Jan 2009 07:38:46 +0000

So beautiful. I love the rhythm and tone and your word usage.

BoJack454 — Sat, 10 Jan 2009 19:10:54 +0000

I agree with the others,well said with lots of depth.

Jasin — Tue, 06 Jan 2009 10:15:20 +0000

Wonderful poem, nice addition.

Patrick Bernauw — Mon, 29 Dec 2008 19:01:56 +0000

A sonnet with an “archaic” tone, beautiful rhymes and rhythms… WOW!

eddiego65 — Mon, 22 Dec 2008 15:01:44 +0000

Beautiful poem! I like the triumphant ending and the expression of hope.

Glynis Smy — Sun, 21 Dec 2008 11:34:51 +0000

Beautiful work, thanks for sharing.

goodselfme — Thu, 18 Dec 2008 07:16:12 +0000

Well penned with great influence on the imagery for complete utter enjoyment.