http://authspot.com/poetry/the-vaues/ Wed, 15 Feb 2012 22:33:58 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 http://authspot.com/poetry/the-vaues/comment-page-1/#comment-1010245 TroostAvenue Mon, 16 Nov 2009 18:45:10 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/the-vaues/#comment-1010245 I've seen you do lists before and they can be quite attractive to the mind, but this one just seems to end, like you might have been able to keep going on. I'd feel better if it had a "bottom line", something perhaps that the preceding would naturally lead up to as a finale. I’ve seen you do lists before and they can be quite attractive to the mind, but this one just seems to end, like you might have been able to keep going on. I’d feel better if it had a “bottom line”, something perhaps that the preceding would naturally lead up to as a finale.

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