A poem based on addiction and obsessive need….

Sullied copper pieces,

counted in their hundreds

by his idle hands. Neatly

stacked in soaring structures

of soiled bronze, their sum

the meagre herald of a misspent youth.

A breadth of futile wealth,

the harvest of frail deeds

and bare, listless days. Not

enough to change a life or

mend its wasteful ways,

nor dare to suit the purpose of desire.

In total though, enough,

to seek an honest stupor

in fleet, liquid seep. A 

means too soon diminished,

its every steeple toppled

by the voracity of need.

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  • JoeLopy on Aug 21, 2010

    A great description of the human feelings when pushed by the vortix of ”excess” desire…………….I really enjoyed it. Thank you!

  • L R Humphries on Aug 21, 2010

    Thanks Joe, am so glad you enjoyed….

  • Starpisces on Aug 21, 2010

    a very well expressed poem, well done!
    :)

  • mysocalledlife on Aug 21, 2010

    wow! wish i can create something like this! very well done indeed

  • Marie Milton on Aug 22, 2010

    I haven’t read a piece of poetry like this for a long time :) )..well done. There’s something about it that sure does capture the reader :) )

    Nice Work!

  • Brewed Coffee on Aug 22, 2010

    Very deep. Great poem!

  • L R Humphries on Aug 29, 2010

    Thank you all, I am grateful for the read and the kind words.

    Take care peeps,

    Lew.

  • The Real Poet on Sep 24, 2010

    It’s ‘Dope’; nice flow like a settling creek….

  • L R Humphries on Sep 27, 2010

    Cheers mate, glad you enjoyed the piece.

    Lew

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