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The story of my life,

Falling further, fading back.

Broken wedges two sizes small,

Lonely view of a push-up bra.

Going through life without a companion,

My last dream turned to dust.

The days bounce and sway away,

Time to collect then walk again.

With no more tears to cry,

Just one meaningless kiss.

To never have to deal with life again,

I must say death is a gift from grace.

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  • diamondpoet on Dec 22, 2009

    Wow that was very intense, great write.

  • ladydryle on Dec 22, 2009

    great post…

  • athena goodlight on Dec 22, 2009

    Good choice of words. Nice thoughts.

  • Mila Marcos on Dec 22, 2009

    If there’s a method to someone’s madness or a means to an end, then no matter what you do for a living, life is worth living. I think I understand what you’re saying a/c and I liked your poem :-)

  • LoveDoctor on Dec 22, 2009

    Excellent poem. keep up the good work.

  • Darla Cooke on Dec 22, 2009

    Very good poem!

  • Liz Sapphire on Dec 22, 2009

    Inspiring… I loved this.

  • Atanacio on Dec 22, 2009

    wow this was really written well :)

  • Teves on Dec 22, 2009

    Nice work…

  • AlmaG on Dec 22, 2009

    Wow that was a wondeful poem Ashley :)

  • KitKat93 on Dec 22, 2009

    very intense poem liked it alot

  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Dec 22, 2009

    Very intense well written poem.

  • mkd1788 on Dec 23, 2009

    very well done…nice work

  • thuanynguyen on Dec 23, 2009

    A likeable read.

  • Aiyanna on Dec 23, 2009

    A thought provoking poem for me!!! Thank you for sharing :-)

  • Jane Jane on Dec 23, 2009

    very nice piece but I find it sad.

  • aniket on Dec 23, 2009

    that was great.\”death is a gift from grace \” was the best line.

  • LiteraryPrincess on Dec 23, 2009

    Hmmm…wow.

  • cutedrishti8 on Dec 23, 2009

    Great piece of work..

  • FaceOff on Dec 23, 2009

    nice post dear

  • logo88 on Dec 23, 2009

    Surpirising and provocative piece. Thank you

  • Seth Frederiksen on Dec 23, 2009

    wow, that was really good. very well written. great job.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Dec 23, 2009

    Without them people can’t exist
    Some will die
    Without knowing why
    We all are ever born.
    In war as well as in peace
    They are an essentiality
    We must compensate
    Their lives suitably
    The work they do
    Can’t be said
    Is admirable
    But yet it is adorable
    They serve to live
    Ere they die
    Can anyone say why?

  • STEVE666 on Dec 23, 2009

    Raw and perfectly put!

  • lillyrose on Dec 29, 2009

    your words never fail to bring out my emotions Alc!

  • Milton H Peebles III on Jan 6, 2010

    Good read – put this on StumbleUpon
    Take Care, DreamSweet and let Your Heart Shine
    ~ milty

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