There is a wall, a retaining wall, along the beach in West Seattle, where I enjoy the actions of the waves as they come in with full force and throw their fury. The ocean spray from this is fantastic, and I fully embrace it, even getting drenched sometimes, but it is fun!

THE WALL

There is a wall,

  A wall it seems,

To curb the tide,

  It’s life that teems;

No undercut,

  No stripping land,

The tide right here,

  It has been banned;

But to sit on,

  This concrete wall,

Is to enjoy,

  The power call;

Spray does shower,

  When tides do hit,

The showers rain,

  And quite a bit;

Power coming,

  Hits this great wall,

Throws up fury,

  I have a ball;

A place I’m drenched,

  But I don’t care,

My being here,

  Lays my soul bare.

PTR February 27, 2011

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  • Angela Ohm on Feb 27, 2011

    I love this ! You have a wonderful style of writing ! I really enjoy reading your poetry.

  • papaleng on Feb 28, 2011

    a nice descriptive poem.

  • tiffi on Mar 1, 2011

    Great poem! I enjoyed it!

  • Juliana on Mar 2, 2011

    I love it, what a beautiful picture too! It reminds me of a place near Lake Michigan where I used to go as a teenager.
    Thanks for sharing.

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