The Way It Makes Me Feel

Michele Cameron Drew on Dec 7, 2008

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Look to me again and smile…

When your eyes looked at mine,
You could see into my soul.
And I was fascinated by,
The depth of your perception.

Then a smile crossed your lips,
Like sunshine through the morning mist.
And though I don’t know why,
I felt such a strong connection.

Across a crowded room,
I heard the wheels of your mind,
In synchronicity with mine,
As one together marking time.

If for only just a moment,
Look to me again and smile,
So I can look into your eyes,
And remember for all time,
The way it makes me feel.

—Michele Cameron Drew

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goodselfme on Dec 7, 2008
Oh that look and that feel is beyond words. You do the words justice here to bring that fully to life!
Debra. on Dec 7, 2008
A very warm and inviting poem. Loved it ,Michele.
God bless.
BC Doan on Dec 7, 2008
You remind me of an old feeling through this poem..very nice!
Jasin on Dec 7, 2008
Love at first sight, how beautiful.
Joie Schmidt on Dec 7, 2008
Sweet – like the soft sigh of lover’s so nice*

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.
Jeoffrey Meister on Dec 7, 2008
Nice, Michele. You have emphasized how so much can be said without ever opening our mouths.
rileyd on Dec 7, 2008
Great way to express that feeling.
Francois Hagnere on Dec 8, 2008
Very beautiful poem, Michele. A smile costs nothing but makes you feel so rich when you receive it.
Best Regards,
François
Lauren Axelrod on Dec 8, 2008
Wow, very romantic Michelle. I started lighting candles, if you know what I mean. lol
YolieM on Dec 10, 2008
so sweet.
Vanja Kovacic on Dec 11, 2008
A very nice poem, very romantic and beautiful. Thank you!
Adam Henry Sears on Dec 12, 2008
Hi, Michele, how are you?
This is quite a defining gaze. Thanks for sharing.
eddiego65 on Dec 14, 2008
Mesmerizingly beautiful! Loved it.
Aardaerimus on Dec 22, 2008
That’s a place that many of us can identify with. Beautifully written, Michele.
Morgana on Jan 6, 2009
Very well written, beautiful poem
Bo Russo on Jan 10, 2009
Simply beautiful,nothing else to say.
Christy Tuller on Jan 21, 2009
This is beautiful! I love it!
Riley Themend on Jan 29, 2009
this is the most beautiful poem i have read all night
Ben donovan on Jan 31, 2009
Very smooth enjoyed the feelings well done.

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