This came from last nights unfinished dream. Glad that I could remember it this morning when I got up. Wrote this all down before I got out of bed. Now waiting for next dream installment.

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Wedding Murder
22 Jan 2011

More than 3,000 years ago
In this castle
Floating deep in space
A legend on its on

No one lives here anymore
Long dead ghosts walk here
But many come seeking
A mystery old yet living

Today they shall have
The Wedding Murder again
A reenactment all did wait
Maybe this time will solve

The castle a museum now
People walk through daily
The most curious piece
The crown of the bride

Very pretty crown of gold
Made by the family
Just for her Wedding
Everyone wants a closer look

In the center a missing stone
No one ever thought
Was worth much of anything
But it was a stone collected

As a child the bride loved to play
With little stones she found
Playing here and there
Where ever the family did visit

All know the story
Of Bride and Groom
A beautiful Wedding
Then all did bow

A prayer said
Then a odd sound
Like something falling to the floor
Followed by a young girls scream

Bride and Groom lay
Still upon the floor
Mothers weeping
Over them

That morning a wedding
That evening a funeral
The Groom wept
As they lay her away

For 1,000 years no one
Was allowed to return
But curiosity that did change
Now all seek strange questions

Where is the stone
Why is it gone
What really killed the bride
Whose ghost walks these halls
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  • Darla Cooke on Jan 22, 2011

    Great writing!

  • Palestrya on Jan 22, 2011

    Nice mystery. I like it bunches! Write more. . .

  • s j tubrazy on Jan 22, 2011

    nice dream

  • PR Mace on Jan 23, 2011

    What a mystery.

  • Petalm on Jan 23, 2011

    Wow. Impressive writing.

  • A Bromley on Mar 13, 2011

    Good mystery. I like a good ghost story, Next chapter please.

  • Hendrik on Mar 14, 2011

    Well written. Beautiful bride!

  • CVSivaprakashan on Mar 15, 2011

    Wonderful mystery.

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