The Whining Woodsman

Lady Sunshine on Nov 11, 2009

Tags: cabin, Cozy, forest, hug, snow, snug, splinter, whining, wife, winter, Wood, woodsman

Don’t let his hardy looks fool you.

Snow falls in a forest, deep in winter
Falling upon a cabin far below
A woodsman chopping wood gets a splinter
And quickly runs back to his wood chateau

He cries out to his wife, whining to her
“Take it out honey, for it hurts too much!”
In a flash, she takes it out in a blur
For his loving wife had such a deft touch

So grateful, he grabbed his wife in a hug
And kissed her so hard, even more in love
They fit in each others arms, nicely snug
Looking so cozy, like warm knitted gloves

He goes back outside to chop wood again
But returns with a splinter, once again!

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Hansika on Nov 11, 2009
wonderful poem..
Themax on Nov 11, 2009
beautiful creation my friend as you said that beautiful moment in your poem it was rally mesmerizing,Thanks for sharing
maranatha on Nov 11, 2009
This is so cute! I have one of those big tough soodsmen too! Love the picture.
Atanacio on Nov 11, 2009
very creative and the pciture was perfectly selected to tag along with your write
cardy on Nov 11, 2009
Love the way you have wrote this a very good read sweet work!
Teves on Nov 11, 2009
Hi sunshine. Merry Christmas. Nice poem…
Shirley Shuler on Nov 11, 2009
Hi Lady Sunshine, great poem, could it be that the whining woodsman returns with a splinter to get another hug and a kiss, lol. Love the picture!!
Yovita Siswati on Nov 12, 2009
beautiful poem! I like the ending.
giftarist on Nov 12, 2009
Creative poet, like this one.
cebuanaeyez on Nov 12, 2009
That darn splinter! Very creative writing!
Jane Jane on Nov 13, 2009
haha. I like this. really nice.

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