The Wilderness Surrounds Us

carissimi on Aug 25, 2010

As we find each other in the night.

the wilderness surrounds us

as we find each other in the night

the trickles of the river

helps mark the time slipping

as the hours pass us by

the fire now just glows

it shimmers, it dances, so pleasureable slow

as we hold on to each other

to keep the coldness out at bay

there are no words exchanged

for there is nothing left to say

but the silence that embraces us

brings us comfort with the air

for the dreamers of the night

are falling asleep as we dream

the dreams we write

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Comments (18)

PSingh1990 on Aug 25, 2010
Great Share.
JoeLopy on Aug 25, 2010
Very nice. I really enjoyed this poem. Thank you for sharing.
JoeLopy on Aug 25, 2010
I really enjoyed this poem. Thank you for sharing.
JoeLopy on Aug 25, 2010
Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.
Sharif Ishnin on Aug 25, 2010
Liked this. Having some warmth in the cold of the night is good.
Christine Ramsay on Aug 25, 2010
A very comforting piece.

Christine
Starpisces on Aug 25, 2010
a lovely poem about a romantic night.
Marie Milton on Aug 25, 2010
“As we dream the dreams we write”…those are just the most beautiful words )…
flowerrose on Aug 25, 2010
interesting poem.
LoveDoctor on Aug 25, 2010
Lovely and romantic.
Raj the Tora on Aug 25, 2010
You have reminded me of William Wordsworth, running to re-read his poetry collection. Thanks chum
GodsGrace on Aug 25, 2010
Very Nice Poem
Yalonda on Aug 25, 2010
This is a very comforting piece! Very enjoyable!
akira14 on Aug 25, 2010
nice one..
sandcastle on Aug 26, 2010
Love ,well written, poem. Great share.
rajaryanme on Aug 26, 2010
A good share.
1hopefulman on Aug 27, 2010
May there always be dreamers!
yes me on Aug 30, 2010
Liked it cheers

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