The Wind

wonder on Oct 5, 2009

Tags: storm, twirl, twist, Whisk, whorl, wind

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My paintings are now coming of use. Thanks.

With a whisk and a whorl and a twist and a twirl

That’s how the lasses dance

But the cyclone, storm whatever you call

Drives the globe swirling and

It goes a wobbling in a trance.

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Comments (15)

raman13 on Oct 5, 2009
good

very good
ken bultman on Oct 5, 2009
Quite nice…both the painting and the poem. What is the “canvas?” Linen?
Mr Ghaz on Oct 5, 2009
Another excellent poem..so creative and unique piece..love the pics too..Thanks for sharing
giftarist on Oct 5, 2009
Like this a lot.. Nice painting also
chitragopi on Oct 5, 2009
Beautifully pictured wind with paint and words
Jane Jane on Oct 5, 2009
you’re a great painter.
martinpm on Oct 5, 2009
your are an artist!!. nice painting.
Leonardo da Vinci E. on Oct 6, 2009
Ode to the wind.
CA Johnson on Oct 6, 2009
I really liked your painting and your poem. You truly are a gifted artist.
Mr Ghaz on Oct 6, 2009
. I LOVED your works..especially the painting looks stunning..LOl..lovely poem too. Thanks for sharing.
Eunice Tan on Oct 9, 2009
Romantic feeling is around.
cynthiac on Oct 14, 2009
very nice poem! love the painting!
John Watson on Oct 18, 2009
I just cant get enough of your poems!

Keep it up!
Teves on Oct 20, 2009
I love this article….
erwinkennythomas on Sep 15, 2011
great!

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