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The Wind and the Sea

BradONeill on Jul 18, 2009
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A flirtatious response to Morgana’s poetic invitation.



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The Wind and the Sea

By Brad O’Neill inspired by Morgana

You are indeed the sea I shall be your sky,
your waves pushing my winds to satisfy.

I shall call on my clouds to fill your being,
lightning shall strike nothing between.

The thunder shall declare my love,

a pounding, pulsing crash from above!

The passion from our bodies shall drown the land
together we rage a tempest, stronger than any man.

Entire cities will fall to your waves,
when my wind pushes deeply into your nave.

The moisture from your sea shall empower me,
swelling my clouds with strength indeed.

and after we release all the power within,

the song of the sea birds will gently begin.

I will toss playfully along your waves,
never being to far away.

You can be the bath in which I bathe
and I will be the strength and power you crave.

You need only look to the sky
and I shall be plunging ready to dive.

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  • Alistair Briggs on Jul 18, 2009

    I know what you mean ;)
    Great work.

  • David Crerand on Jul 18, 2009

    get a room, get ‘er done, and get back to work. Waiting on Leaf and Silent Tongue Part 2.

  • Morgana on Jul 18, 2009

    I’m glad I inspired you to write such beautiful words. I also enjoyed our poetic rendezvous last night lol :)

  • F J McCarthy on Jul 18, 2009

    Very passionate,but with Morgana as inspiration I would expect nothing less. Great poem.

  • Katie Marie on Jul 18, 2009

    This is such powerful imagery. Absolutely loved it!

  • 4Cassandra on Jul 18, 2009

    excellent, passionate plus

  • Brenda Nelson on Jul 18, 2009

    Awesome, but the three some gringoperry suggests with you and fegger is a bit concerning… lol

    anyhow great poem, terrific pics too.

  • Mark Gordon Brown on Jul 18, 2009

    wow talk about Hot Content?

  • HelloSiti on Jul 19, 2009

    I don’t have any dirty mind after I read that poetry or that poetry is not vulgar.

  • Duff D Moss on Jul 20, 2009

    So you’re not all blood and guts after all. good write bloke

  • I Have Had Enough on Jul 20, 2009

    I doubt I would ever suggest a threesome that didn’t involve me…but then if I was drunk…hmm? Anywho great poem Brad, your writing get’s better by the day. I can’t wait to read the novel!

  • BullwinkleMuse on Jul 25, 2009

    A nice, symphonic collision of passions, rhythmically crashing together. Reminds me of a line from the Stones’ “Jumpin’ Jack Flash”: “I was born in a crossfire hurricane..”.
    “Entire cities will fall to your waves,
    when my wind pushes deeply into your nave.” – Whooya…If I were the wind, that’s where I’d be too.

  • Marie Milton on Jul 25, 2009

    “The passion from our bodies shall drown the land together we rage a tempest, stronger than any man\”…hehehe…great work Brad…I like it : )

  • Mikayla on Jul 25, 2009

    You have an incredible fervour when it comes to poetry Brad O’Neill..dosen’t matter what the subject or theme is..you always deliver in spades..superb my friend.

  • maranatha on Jul 25, 2009

    Came close to being too clear…. vague suggestion is so romantic. Love the work, though, and the pics are awesome!

  • cafftee on Jul 25, 2009

    Whoo, hot stuff Brad.

  • Alina Beck on Jul 25, 2009

    Wonderful, wonderful use of the metaphor!

  • ken bultman on Jul 25, 2009

    Oceanic romantic fantasy. Excellent write.

  • goodselfme on Jul 27, 2009

    Truly enjoyed the message and the deepth of the entire piece.

  • shelly barclay on Jul 27, 2009

    How raomantic. lol Very pretty, Brad.

  • WriteEditSeek on Jul 27, 2009

    Beautiful erotic poem. I loved the sea and the sky metaphors. Well done.

  • sweetievee on Jul 27, 2009

    A creative and well-written depiction of two passionate lovers’ increasing desire for one another- giving, taking, and strengthening one another all the while.

  • Fresh Writing on Jul 27, 2009

    A romantic piece here-nicely done!

    (Found through The Triond Anthology)

    Kind regards,

    -Fresh Writing

  • Austin Briggs on Oct 8, 2011

    Whoa, strong stuff. Really liked the ideas and the imagery :)

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