Comments on: The Window http://authspot.com/poetry/the-window-8/ Wed, 15 Feb 2012 09:57:14 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 By: hfj http://authspot.com/poetry/the-window-8/comment-page-1/#comment-837975 hfj Thu, 06 Aug 2009 15:27:10 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/the-window-8/#comment-837975 Close that window. Well done. Close that window. Well done.

]]> By: Bohemian Bystander http://authspot.com/poetry/the-window-8/comment-page-1/#comment-837973 Bohemian Bystander Sun, 26 Jul 2009 04:59:08 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/the-window-8/#comment-837973 The rhythmn in the first two stanzas is great but from there on the matching pace slips in the last three lines of each verse.<br /> <br /> Tremendous ending, though - humourous poetry is very "in" at the moment. The rhythmn in the first two stanzas is great but from there on the matching pace slips in the last three lines of each verse.

Tremendous ending, though – humourous poetry is very “in” at the moment.

]]> By: Marie Milton http://authspot.com/poetry/the-window-8/comment-page-1/#comment-837971 Marie Milton Sun, 12 Jul 2009 16:58:58 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/the-window-8/#comment-837971 Love your work ; )) Love your work ; ))

]]> By: jesuswasahippy http://authspot.com/poetry/the-window-8/comment-page-1/#comment-837969 jesuswasahippy Mon, 29 Jun 2009 23:41:40 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/the-window-8/#comment-837969 Earplugs? Earplugs?

]]> By: Billygoat http://authspot.com/poetry/the-window-8/comment-page-1/#comment-837967 Billygoat Sun, 28 Jun 2009 21:55:40 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/the-window-8/#comment-837967 Love the ending! Love the ending!

]]> By: fivegoldstars http://authspot.com/poetry/the-window-8/comment-page-1/#comment-837965 fivegoldstars Sun, 28 Jun 2009 19:03:47 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/the-window-8/#comment-837965 Thanks Scout - unfortunately had to do a twelve mile hike the next day! Didn't really intend to write a poem - it just kind of grew out of a delirious insomniac insanity. Thanks Scout – unfortunately had to do a twelve mile hike the next day! Didn’t really intend to write a poem – it just kind of grew out of a delirious insomniac insanity.

]]> By: scout http://authspot.com/poetry/the-window-8/comment-page-1/#comment-837963 scout Sun, 28 Jun 2009 18:59:08 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/the-window-8/#comment-837963 Great to get asleep the following night I guess!!<br /> First time for a poem, not bad. Great to get asleep the following night I guess!!
First time for a poem, not bad.

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