No matter what happens to you, it does not have to affect your heart. This poem took me over four years to write. It is part of the Dancer series.

More of my work:

All Men Have Baggage
Primitive Thunder
Dance In The Woods
Red Eyes and Muddy Bones
Lost Secrets

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  • Christine Ramsay on Jan 22, 2009

    A moving story and so well written. My children at school used to love reading stories like this.

    Christine

  • Darla Smith on Jan 22, 2009

    I really like this one. It’s very interesting.

  • lisa on Jan 22, 2009

    All people should look at the inside of a person or in this case dragon.

  • Anne McNew on Jan 23, 2009

    Well written. I’d love to read more from your articles. Keep posting.

  • milli on Jan 24, 2009

    WOW

  • Daisy Peasblossom on May 22, 2009

    Beautiful allegory. We all come from our battles wounded, and never heal perfectly.

  • PR Mace on Aug 22, 2009

    Such a moving and well told tale.

  • Darla Cooke on Jan 8, 2010

    This is beautifully written! Great job writing it!

  • Palestrya on Apr 11, 2011

    I like this very much! Thank you for explaining why he was marked with black! Write on . . .

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