By Brian Mcclanahan on Wednesday, June 29, 2011 at 9:33pm.

you’re love is chilling,

an incomparable feeling,

overwhelming me,

yet making me feel free,



as i look into your eyes,

my emptiness is deprived,

it runs and hides,

and the true person i am thrives,



as i hold you close,

it sends chills threw my bones,

this feeling that has grown,

is one i have not known,



as our lips meet,

my heart leaps,

skipping a beat,

so soft and sweet,



you are kind and caring,

you are sweet and loving,

baby you are amazing.

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  • radhicka on Aug 16, 2012

    your girl is lucky!

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