Eh, I didn’t like how this turned out.

A big and burly outdoorsman…

© Lady Sunshine

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  • Buzz J on Dec 20, 2011

    Very cutey, lady sunshine. Thanks.

  • Yvhes P. on Dec 20, 2011

    very nice piece. thanks for sharing =)

  • FX777222999 on Dec 20, 2011

    Nice way of warming himself.

  • Christine Ramsay on Dec 20, 2011

    That’s a good way of getting a cuddle. A lovely poem.

  • Erin Miller on Dec 20, 2011

    Aww that’s funny and cute. Why do you not like the way it came out?

  • Starpisces on Dec 20, 2011

    so well expressed lovely poem.
    Come back with another splinter, haha, sure get scolded by the wife this round. :)

  • sloanie on Dec 20, 2011

    He sounds to me like a bit of a wimp, if he goes home crying
    with every little splint. She’d till him to get knotted, if she wasn’t so besotted.
    I liked your poem just thought I’d play along.

  • Shirley Shuler on Dec 30, 2011

    Hi Lady Sunshine, I think he just wanted to cuddle, and it worked, lol.

  • dodolbete on Mar 20, 2012

    haha… only reasoning? LOL

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