From my point of view.

Nightmares and visions   In my head   Upon my bed   Disturbing me   Unnerving me   Fearing me death   Welcome to the horror   The world on a downward slide   I escaped that devils’ clutches   Him and me eye to eye   Spread my wings and took flight   I beat that monster of the night   Conquered   And faced my fear

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  • Bill M. Tracer on Apr 9, 2009

    Nice poetic view of fear. Well said.

  • hfj on May 12, 2009

    I’m glad you escaped ole satin’s clutches. Stay away from that sucker. Nice expressive write. Well done.

  • Poetic Angel on Sep 15, 2009

    A very bad dream with a great outcome….You said very well how satin can try to get a hold of us, but if we take charge we can face that fear and beat him at his own game. Good job!

  • nsmukundan on Oct 12, 2009

    well said. Really nice …My best wishes to you…best wishes to you…

  • dloriginal on Jan 2, 2011

    Well said, great. Thanks

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