This is a poem that is very personal to me.

This is just a bad dream
that i’ll never wake up from
this world is corrupted and
you still think im the dumb one.
Are you listening now?

The map will not show you
all the things that i see
the reality isnt always what you
want it to be,
Am i making any sense?

Safe is just a metaphor
for how we think way too much
Tell me how im so messed up,
and ill tell you how this world is such
a misconception.
Where are we supposed to go?

Nowhere feels so at home
when I’m chopped up
and left to rebuild
such a terrible world.
Am I still alone?

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  • Katie Marie on May 20, 2009

    This is definitely one of your best. Personal stuff usually is.

  • Jefffrey on May 20, 2009

    You’re not alone bro. ツ

  • eminemgrl123 on May 24, 2009

    You’re a great poet in the making. I feel like you’re still trying to find yourself though. I know what the search is like.

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