Should we give up enjoying life as we get older? I think not.


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My Hubby and I first met

So very many years ago,

When I walked into a ballroom

Not really looking for a beau.

I was wearing a red dress

And he sped across the floor.

When he begged me for a quickstep

His pleas I couldn’t ignore.

He had eyes of the brightest blue

That I had ever seen.

He spoke just like a gentleman

Well mannered and serene.

We danced as if we’d always

Danced as a pair before.

He was gorgeous and attentive,

I couldn’t have asked for more.

Now forty years have passed.

We don’t go dancing any more.

He says he hasn’t the energy

That he had had before.

The years have taken their toll

On our knees and hips and feet,

And there’s very little room

Where our stomachs used to meet.

He now lies on the sofa

Watching endless TV shows,

And snores his way right through them

As he has his little doze.

His eyes no longer bright

And his hair now thin on top,

It seems to me as if he’s brought

His life to a full stop.

But no! This cannot happen.

We are not so very old,

That we need to stay indoors

Against activity and cold.

I’m going to shake him up

And take him to the gym,

And try to restore

Both his vigour and his vim.

Then maybe we can dance again

As we did years ago,

And occasionally have a meal out

And maybe see a show.

Then if he wants a nap

He will certainly deserve it.

He’ll have done his husband’s duties

And can rest little bit.

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  • ken bultman on Jun 25, 2009

    You go girl. Poor hubby.

  • Hugo La Rosa on Jun 25, 2009

    This is an outstanding poem, Christine, not only playful, but full of meaning and consolation. I guess you can print it on nice card stock and send it to your friends. I bet they’ll appreciate it, as much as I do. Thank you!

  • Poetic Enigma on Jun 25, 2009

    Getting older shouldnt stop one from enjoying life! It should be lived to the fullest :) This is a outstanding poem, absolutely a magnificent write!

  • clay hurtubise on Jun 25, 2009

    You go girl! Rattle him out of there! If his joints are creaky, try water exercises… easy on the joints, but builds um muscle.
    Take care,
    Clay

  • Teresa M Sims on Jun 25, 2009

    such a nice story keep it up i wrote one a few days ago called he loves me but yours is better i only been married 2 years and as of now hes my king and does everything even clean the house but my GOD PARENTS ARE UP IN AGE AND THEY STILL ENJOY EACH OTHER THANK U FOR SHARING YOU MADE MY DAY

  • Glynis Smy on Jun 25, 2009

    Lovely, Christine :)

  • Deep Blue on Jun 25, 2009

    Just a walk outside to limber those muscles will bring back the joy of life. Dont’t let the comfort of your home cripple you two from moving around. Well written struggle which is evident as we grow older.

  • julianhw on Jun 25, 2009

    Well written – music is the answer – the right tune at the right time – the brain motivates and the muscles remember!!

  • Ruby Hawk on Jun 25, 2009

    Christine, I am with you on this one. I have never understood why men like the TV and naps so much.We have to shake them up every so often.

  • Elizabeth Abbott on Jun 25, 2009

    As always very well written! I know that you know this is the case among many “older” couples. You are so very correct in your meaning of just because we are getting older we don’t just give up. I bet you are so very beautiful in your red dress! He would be as handsome dooded-up! Sounds like lots of fun is about to take place. I so hope you will both enjoy this time and do lots of laughing! I know you will! My prayers! Liz

  • Radhika Bhargava on Jun 25, 2009

    That’s so sweet,I think enjoyment is something which should never end.

  • HeyZel on Jun 25, 2009

    Wow. How cute.

  • OhSugar on Jun 25, 2009

    I enjoyed reading your love story and how the years can change things between partners. I don’t think we should let the flame go out of our relationships.

  • Phill Senters on Jun 25, 2009

    Great! Wake him up, the exercise will for both of good no mater what you do.

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Jun 25, 2009

    It was so sweet. But I think when we get older, we should enjoy life. What I mean here is to cultivate hobbies (e.g. dancing, drawing) to release the tense of life and to get rid of the fear of death as well. Liked it.

  • Momma Tells on Jun 25, 2009

    You make me want to get away from the computer and go outside!

  • Sheila M on Jun 25, 2009

    That was so cool. You are an inspiration=)

  • Mr Ghaz on Jun 25, 2009

    Excellent post!!..nice story..well presentation as always..Thanx for sharing this magnificent work.

  • maranatha on Jun 26, 2009

    Well done, Christine! We are thirty-one years now, and it’s time to go dancing!

  • Christine Ramsay on Jun 26, 2009

    Thank you so much everyone. I love and appreciate all your comments.

    Christine

  • Kate Smedley on Jun 26, 2009

    I love the story of how you met in particular, good luck with encouraging him off the sofa, this is a great poem in your usual lovely style Christine.

  • Daisy Peasblossom on Jun 26, 2009

    Maybe wake him up for a game of checkers? Start slow?

  • Tina Cassello on Jun 26, 2009

    This reminded me of my parents who met at a square dance. He was good looking and outgoing and danced with all of the women. Mom was a wall flower and flattered that he asked her to dance and did not understand why he would be interested in her when he had all of the other women trying to get his attention. Later he also became an overweight couch potato.

  • Melody SJAL on Jun 26, 2009

    Lovely piece, Christine.

  • Karen Gross on Jun 26, 2009

    I’ve got one just like yours on my sofa too! Except that he never did like to dance, and it’s only been twenty years for us.

  • California Dreamer on Jun 26, 2009

    Oh My, never feel too old. I always say that my birth certificate may say one thing, but my heart and soul says another, I feel about 15years younger then I am, and plan to stay that way for many more years to come. Enjoy life to the fullest, dream of, and look forward to many more years in the future :)

  • rizzei on Jun 27, 2009

    a really well-told story:) it\’s so wonderful:)

  • Mike on Jun 27, 2009

    The perils of growing old. You do well to shake them off. An enjoyable look at life

  • Lauren Axelrod on Jun 27, 2009

    I love this Christine

  • Ruby Hawk on Jun 27, 2009

    Another I like.

  • vim3 on Jun 29, 2009

    You are a real inspiration! I guess I am more like your hubby:) but after reading this, I feel like taking up some activity too.
    Hope you manage to drag! Have fun!

  • Hazel Crowther on Jun 29, 2009

    Wonderful as ever, I know what you are talking about! Well done.

  • Jamie Myles on Jun 30, 2009

    What can I say? I love it.

  • CutestPrincess on Jul 11, 2009

    i have a good point… nice poem as always…

  • S A JOHNSON on Jul 20, 2009

    Cute and warming.

  • Lady Sunshine on Aug 8, 2009

    Meeting in the ballroom can lead to love. Sweet and inspiring, Christine.

  • Aldeano on Aug 25, 2009

    Warms the heart, and a reality! =)

  • CA Johnson on Aug 28, 2009

    What a beautiful poem! I hope you and your hubby do start to go out again. I agree that you should still enjoy life and that shouldn’t change as we get older.

  • Sonia Doreen on Aug 29, 2009

    I’m lost for words here, time does fly fast when you’re in love…great write and beautiful picture!

  • mark ramsay on Sep 13, 2009

    You have described Dad so vividly. You’ll have to get him off that settee.

  • Jacques Berkeley on Dec 6, 2011

    Excellent!

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