For your viewing and reading pleasure or pressure.
Sorry for getting out of hand (can’t be helped).
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Who is inside the fence?

Could be the mother hen

Or could be the young man

Well, that have to depend

Do you notice both of them

Seems to be good friends

Only they will understand

Not everybody else can

The guy’s hair all stand

I think it’s the latest trend

He’s praised by mother hen

Who says “what a handsome man”

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http://authspot.com/poetry/the-competitor-shop-is-just-nearby/

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  • narupem11 on May 29, 2011

    Very Well Written

  • Sharif Ishnin on May 29, 2011

    Birds of the same feather flock together. Must be mother and son.lol.

  • pattiann on May 29, 2011

    Cute!

  • webseowriters on May 29, 2011

    lol

  • Jimmy Shilaho on May 29, 2011

    Hahaha, I think its the guy who is inside the cage.

  • biantoro on May 29, 2011

    poetry is funny, very interesting

  • Francois Hagnere on May 29, 2011

    The hen is so surprised! another funny post. Thank you my friend.

  • Dreamy777 on May 29, 2011

    nice poem

  • Tulan on May 29, 2011

    LOL, very funny.

  • LCM Linda on May 29, 2011

    Ha-ha. What a perfect match. Star, to go further, maybe it’s a tragic romance. Both of them are in love, can see each other but can’t get to the other side……. :D

  • Val Mills on May 30, 2011

    Lol, I was going to suggest what Sharif said about mother and son! They can obviously relate to each other.

  • Eunice Tan on May 30, 2011

    Thanks for making us laugh

  • Lady Sunshine on May 30, 2011

    LOL. The chicken is cute. :D

  • SharifaMcFarlane on May 30, 2011

    Mother hen must want hers to be a bit bigger.

  • Cassle Tang on May 30, 2011

    LOL, what a great romance story, but I think that guy won’t get impressed to become a handsome man through a hen’s perspective. LOL! Unless, if he’s having an interest with chickens! Well, at times when people can’t get chicks, maybe they will start to look for some chickens! :D Just kidding.

  • Anuradha Ramkumar on May 31, 2011

    lol…I just loved your sense of humor, Star.

  • papaleng on May 31, 2011

    Funny pair indeed, hope they live happily ever after. I enjoy reading this one.

  • Michal Dorcak on May 31, 2011

    Haha, very funny.

  • PR Mace on Jun 3, 2011

    A funny pair indeed.

  • gaby7 on Jun 4, 2011

    A cunning one here again!

  • CA Johnson on Jun 13, 2011

    This is really cute and funny. I have seen guys with hair like this in real life.

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