About an individual who is trapped within his own corpse shell.

I can’t stop the whispering rain
From falling on the shroud that is my mind.
I climb domineering fences,
But I can’t outrun the burn.
Seething snakes crawl around my shouting feet
And make their way up to my scalding throat,
Squeezing and tightening the reigns.
There are ripples inside my metallic stomach.
A zesty sensation that absorbs my senses
And scalds their parched waters that dance
On top of my wilted flesh.
Hungry is my passionate wave
That leaks havoc into your hidden desires.
Sallow is the dew that caresses each tired leaflet,
And milky is the sun’s morning bliss.
I am the hills bleeding throughout your leaping spirit.
Is this the song of the damned?
For I am the dame of the great Dane
Who pulls with teething melodies.
I must have been a fool
To believe the ways of the world are blessed unto me.
For the arms of the Mighty King have forgotten my eternal flame.
Woest me, I’m crazed with your deliberation.

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Comments (4)
  • Lauren Axelrod on Sep 25, 2008

    Wow, I love this one Johanna. You had me all the way through.

  • Allison Jae on Oct 1, 2008

    You invoked some powerful images here. Great work. I’ll have to read more of your poetry.

  • jo oliver on Oct 2, 2008

    All of you poetry flows so smoothly and you have great wording.

  • Randy Nephi Homer on Oct 14, 2008

    That is a deep piece of art. Wow! Twice!

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