Among men.

In the old back woods

we watched him lay to see

his soul before the world

in this captivity.

In the old back woods

he spoke a language be

in mumblings incoherent

to be as he should be.

A rag, a bone and hair

he shrank two sizes, three

and scampered underneath

the leaves among the tree.

His eyes so beady blackened

he still could stare at me

and he led his army onward

to make the putrid flee.

A tail so long and mangy

flipped two and fro in glee as

he motioned for his cousins

to chant the words of we…

in order to be free.

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Comments (9)
  • BradONeill on Mar 15, 2010

    I like it. Creepy and interesting kind of like allen. :)

  • Darla Cooke on Mar 15, 2010

    Very good poem!

  • Bo Russo on Mar 15, 2010

    Oh Rats!

  • I Have Had Enough on Mar 15, 2010

    You are equally as strange as Brad.

  • Duff D Moss on Mar 15, 2010

    That was also very cool. I liked it a lot. Great feel to it. Thanks dude

  • Andrew Davies on Mar 16, 2010

    Where did you get my life story?

  • Shaftoe on Mar 28, 2010

    Fun and creepy. Feepy!

  • Ubel Ein on Oct 25, 2010

    Creative and unique.

  • lillyrose on Jul 10, 2011

    I really liked this. I liked the way it made the hairs on my neck stand on end and the goose bumps on my arms tighten. Tomorrow when I walk my dogs I shall think of this poem when I see the plump, round rats run near my feet.

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