A simple poem:)

I can’t find a way out of this pain

feels like there’s no escape

Then, there He came

He saved me and took me away,

away from fear and sorrow

once again, i dreamt of tomorrow

I became whole as new

after all the things I’ve been through

it’s Him who stayed  loving and true

Trials they say are endings

but truly they are blessings

for us to learn and always feel God

and now I knew I just had

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  • herdz on Oct 12, 2009

    to God be the glory! :)

  • Sourav on Oct 12, 2009

    interesting write!!

  • cardy on Oct 12, 2009

    A lovely poem from you!

  • ceegirl on Oct 12, 2009

    love it

  • cutedrishti8 on Oct 12, 2009

    a great lovely and simple poem…

  • Christine Ramsay on Oct 12, 2009

    God is always there if you need him and have faith in him. Nice work.

    Christine

  • Darla Cooke on Oct 12, 2009

    Lovely poem.

  • Debra. on Oct 12, 2009

    Beautiful piece!

  • papaleng on Oct 12, 2009

    I thought this was another romantic poem, anak. but with the him with a capital “H” then I know you are talking about the great Help.. like it much specially the line
    Trials they say are endings

    but truly they are blessings

  • Goodselfme on Oct 12, 2009

    Thank you for this great share!

  • fishfry aka Elizabeth Figueroa on Oct 12, 2009

    Lovely poem, I enjoyed reading it

  • ken bultman on Oct 12, 2009

    You went to the right place for the help you needed.

  • Jenny Heart on Oct 12, 2009

    Beautifully written!

  • Diverseblogger on Oct 12, 2009

    Great Poem

  • wonder on Oct 12, 2009

    A deep and true to life poem.Well composed.

  • Eunice Tan on Oct 13, 2009

    What a wonderful thing that we are saved

  • giftarist on Oct 13, 2009

    That was fantastic..Great piece..

  • CA Johnson on Oct 13, 2009

    I really loved your poem.

  • cebuanaeyez on Oct 14, 2009

    Inspirational and beautifully written.

  • Lily River on Oct 17, 2009

    absolutely gorgeous! He helps when you have faith!

  • Jane Jane on Oct 24, 2009

    Inspiring poem. Just always have faith in Him.

  • deep blue on Oct 24, 2009

    Simply splendid work. Thanks for sharing, Rizz.

  • xoxo on Oct 24, 2009

    Very nice. Inspiring work.

  • CutestPrincess on Nov 7, 2009

    inspiring piece…

  • fragile18 on Nov 9, 2009

    love it. hihi, ngaun ko lang ‘to nabasa. :)

  • qasimdharamsy on Jan 17, 2010

    Lovely…I like it…

  • Antonette Ramos on Feb 3, 2010

    uplifting…. God is really good:)

  • leader jam on Mar 11, 2010

    :>

  • yes me on Mar 25, 2010

    Enjoyed this cheers.

  • Cynthia Cox on Mar 25, 2010

    nice:)

  • Mr. Africa on May 10, 2010

    He is Mighty to deliver.

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