“Dear John” letters cause pain.

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 While the origin of the Dear John letter isn’t quite narrowed down, they became frequent during WW11. Letters started coming only addressed as Dear John instead of ,My Darling or My Love. Either way , Dear John letters were the break up note of that generation and have kept their place in history, even today. Dear John letters are as painful and morale killers as a traditional wound, sometimes even worse. I personally received two, of course on two separate occasions. I still remember the pain as I sat on my rucksack and read the letter over and over again. You try to be a man about it and not cry, but the letter doesn’t pick the best timing. Here is a poem I wrote many years ago after my first Dear John.

                      There is a river that keeps rising in this heart of mine

  and that river keeps rising with each tear I cry.

Once you told me that you loved me, now that was just a lie,

and this river keeps rising with each line Good bye.

 Oh you loved me, oh you held me ,but duty called me away

and you promised to stand be side me, write me every day.

Now I’m weary, oh so dirty, haven’t eaten or slept a wink

holding on to each letter trying to read the faded ink.

But now there’s a river that keeps rising in this heart of mine

You have found yourself a other and written me just a few lines

Dear John, is the open , I cannot read it all right now

there’s a mortar round incomming  may it hit me some how.

There’s a river…………….

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  • L Dalton on Apr 11, 2009

    I can understand the situation. You phrased it well.

  • Christine Ramsay on Apr 11, 2009

    A heart rending tale, beautifully told.

    Christine

  • LOVELYHONEY on Apr 12, 2009

    My river is hope,
    It keeps on rising,
    Perhaps it will take me ashore.
    Or perhaps it will wash me away,
    When I’m no more.

    Whatever it be,
    The river in me,
    Is a hope I love to enjoy,
    The river is my toy.
    Be it a desert or the mountain,
    The river of hope,
    Is within in me.
    And I know that hope alone,
    Can make me live, for you,
    So that for me,
    You would never moan.
    lh

  • Colleen Ranney on Apr 12, 2009

    I feel the heart of this poem, and also hear the music of the river. Great great poem!

  • Fegger on Apr 12, 2009

    Admissions of rejections are often the most difficult to share–when they’re real. My deepest thanks for sharing your experience in this manner.

  • rutherfranc on Apr 13, 2009

    doubly sad, saying goodbye and expecting the worse.. really heartbreaking..

  • Duff D Moss on Apr 13, 2009

    You conveyed the emotion nicely with that one. I guess that would be the last thing you needed in those situations.

  • Ruby Hawk on Apr 13, 2009

    The heartbreak and saddness is so easy to see. I know our guys are still receiving them in Afghanistan and Iraq.it breaks my heart for all of you in earlier wars and for these young ones.

  • macon on Apr 14, 2009

    so heartbreaking. well done on writing this!

  • revivor on May 17, 2009

    Picked this because of the title – the poem is really good (by the way, if you don’t want gaps between lines, use SHIFT ENTER instead of just ENTER at the end of each line)

    loved the finish because the general “Dear John” got really personal with the mortar bit!!
    thanks – revivor

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