nice work.

Nice share, thanks for the same.

I hope it disappears too… damp spots are not good.
I love the way you turned into into shapes, like looking at a cloud.
Well done!

Gorgeous. Reminds me of seeing images in clouds. You have me imagining these now. Love the ending too.

Nice piece. Isn’t it snowing where you are?

there is a damp patch on my ceiling dear liza , dear liza…

Fun poem. I liked this poems playfulness.

Great work… Excited to read more from you soon…:)

I must admit you have a great creative mind.

LOL. Cute piece. The things that can inspire a poet.

Great poem. Thanks.

I like its childlike tone.

it was so much to read this..i really loved it!

it was so much fun to read this..i really loved it!! thnx for sharing it!

Looks like a sign of a roof leak.I had some a while back too.

Lovely poem. I totally enjoyed reading this, thanks ma\’am.

nice share.

very well expressed poem, well done, Christine.

haha very funny poem, Damp patch indeed lol

CR…a great poem…a bad sign…your wet heavy snow has obviously found a weak spot and the moistue is wokring it’s way inside…do not procrastinate or delay in gtting this matter attended to as soon as possible because what may now be a small job could be a major one very soon. Look for presence of icicles along edge of your roof and if you have them, moisture is woking its way up your roof under the shingles…I voted that I like the poem, but definitely not the conditions that have caused the tiny playful kitten to transform into a raging elephant!!! Thanks and take care

CR…a great poem…a bad sign…your wet heavy snow has obviously found a weak spot and the moistue is wokring it\’s way inside…do not procrastinate or delay in gtting this matter attended to as soon as possible because what may now be a small job could be a major one very soon. Look for presence of icicles along edge of your roof and if you have them, moisture is woking its way up your roof under the shingles…I voted that I like the poem, but definitely not the conditions that have caused the tiny playful kitten to transform into a raging elephant!!! Thanks and take care

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What can I say Christine? Theres a lot happening on your Ceiling. Thanks for a fun read.

My childhood home had a leaky roof. I remember imagining all kinds of things about the patterns on the ceiling when I was sent to take a nap during the day.

Fun poem; but Jimbob is right, need to get that checked out!

A very creative piece. well-done. LOL. Jimbob posted five comments on your page.

I hope that damp patch will disappear for your sake Christine. Keep writing.:-)

You always make such a great poem from all that happens to you. Well done and enjoyed. Hope the spot is nothing.

Funny how even ugly situations can provoke the most beautiful thoughts. you make the transition so easy and simple. Fix it as soon as you can.

A very nice read. I have a couple on my ceiling. I need to tell the super about them. I have a false ceiling and probably just need to change a couple of tiles.

This is an interesting poem about a damp patch. It is amazing where the inspiration for poems can came from. I hope the patch disappears soon.

I hope the patch doesn’t turn into a world map

Hahaha! Same thing happens to me at times. Drawing stories in my head by shapes I’m seeing. Sometimes with clouds or even filths on the wall. You have a great imagination. Lovely poem.

Very interesting. Great poem as usual.

Don’t worry everyone the damp patch is just caused by condensation. We get a lot of it in this country especially if you don’t put the heating on that often. There is nothing seriously wrong, just my imagination running riot, Thanks for your concern and your lovely comments.

Christine

Your imagination again has inspired you,in a most wonderful way.
Awesome

it always feels good reading your work Christine…thanks much

Great reading! You have such a fun way of writing your poems! I love them!

Enjoyed reading your well written poem.

Christine your poem reminded me of something I hadn’t thought about in ages. When I was a child I looked at a crinkle on the ceiling, wall or whatever and imagined all sorts of exciting pictures. sounds like that’s what you were doing.

interesting imaginary of a damp ceiling good work!

What an imagination but I do hope it doesn’t grow.

Very funny. I’ll have to look at my damp patches too.

Christine, thankfully you came back and advised us not to be concerned. Lovely and imaginative!

That damp spot sure did inspire a wonderful poem.

Christine, this reminds me of the damp patches resulting from leaks in the old house we lived in when I was a child. I too let my imagination run riot.

Very well said, as usual, Christine. Hopefully this has disappeared. Sometimes we have inspiration from unsuspected things.

Beautiful. You are so creative. I do not recommend a snooze. I was trying to ignore mine, until a few chunks of plaster started to fall. Thank God, it is fixed now.

A very well written poem that seem to blend so well with the times! You truly have a creative mind Teacher Christine!

Another nice one Christine cheers

I enjoyed this poem immensely! It made me remember the small stains on the ceiling over my bed as a child. If one of them moved, I knew there was a bug up there and got out fast! Lol!

Did it go away or did you need a new roof/

Excellent work.

Excellent!