They Just Wait Out There

Darla Cooke on Jul 27, 2009

Eternal Night Creatures.

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They just wait out there,

Hovering in the shadows.

Eerie beings of the night,

Yearning for my blood.

Jumpy I have become,

Unnerved is how I feel.

Shivering from fright,

Terrified of the dark.

Weird noises I can hear,

Advancing even closer.

I want to run far away,

Too frightened to move.

Odds are against me,

Unable to escape now,

Trapped in the darkness.

Targeted by the demons,

Horrid beings draw near.

Each one bearing fangs,

Ravenous with hunger,

Eternal night creatures.

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Francy on Jul 27, 2009
very creative… Like it…
Keep sharing
Deep Blue on Jul 27, 2009
Creatively written.
Jessica Rowe on Jul 27, 2009
Very creative and interesting. Keep em coming
lh on Jul 27, 2009
u read or write ghost stories u will do very well
Bo Russo on Jul 27, 2009
Very cool.
Milton H Peebles III on Jul 27, 2009
This should be read after dark, under moonlight, by the campfire just before the ghost stories begin.

Take Care, DreamSweet and Let Your Heart Shine
~ milty
Ravana on Jul 27, 2009
creative!
rajeev bhargava on Jul 27, 2009
i’ll back that. very creative! the photo is very spooky.
Jamie Myles on Jul 27, 2009
Very dark. So creative and well written. Definitely gave it a like it.
Ken bultman on Jul 27, 2009
They\’re lurking for us.
Tanya Wallace on Jul 27, 2009
One of your best!Excellent work, very enjoyable read.
Sonia Doreen on Jul 27, 2009
Amazing work once agian Darla, Loved it!
kairos on Jul 27, 2009
Oh Darla, you must be an edgar allan poe in your past life

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