Haiku – reflection.

Once more they return

Igniting those hidden paths

Of so long ago

12
Liked it
  • Kharla Jolly on Aug 19, 2012

    A fire that kindled for many years, by the age of these children. Hopefully, it will never go out! Great haiku, thanks for sharing

  • Jswana on Aug 19, 2012

    So sweet. When I look at this I think of the Song 1900 Yesterday by Liz Damon and wonder if that’s what it means. Hope so. :)

  • Kai Vicky on Aug 19, 2012

    nice haiku.

  • jennifer eiffel01 on Aug 19, 2012

    LOvely and the picture is so cute, too!

  • lapasan on Aug 19, 2012

    A happy return.

  • smokychristine on Aug 19, 2012

    Sometimes I long for yesterday. Good haiku.

  • Tiki33 on Aug 19, 2012

    Well done!

  • Sustainable Living on Aug 19, 2012

    Nice.

  • septana on Aug 19, 2012

    great insight and can help in learning

  • herjave01 on Aug 19, 2012

    Love it!

  • elee on Aug 20, 2012

    brilliant article thanks

  • Kristie Claar on Aug 20, 2012

    Love this!

  • avissado on Aug 21, 2012

    does it happen? I wonder…

  • Derdriu on Aug 22, 2012

    Martin, A world of “what if” and “what might have been”!
    Respectfully, and with many thanks for the imagery and words, Derdriu

Leave a Comment
comments powered by Disqus

Hi there!

Hello! Welcome to Authspot, the spot for creative writing.
Read some stories and poems, and be sure to subscribe to our feed!

Find the Spot

Loading