A feeling ,a relationship gone bad.

I am thin, stretched to far,waiting for something to break.

A drum that has felt too many beats,a heart too many aches.

I am the trampoline you dance on with joy,never notice the tears that you rip.

I am the burro that carries your load,never flinch at the sting of your whip.

Time and again I pray for release, from the pain of this prison I’m in.

While you go on oblivious to the anguish you cause me within.

Faster harder the drumbeats sound as you dance upon my soul.

Grinding me into the hard cold ground with a heart that is black as coal.

I feel myself fading, you have pushed too hard,the skin is about too burst.

Of all the mistakes I have ever made, loving you was the worst

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  • Mr Ghaz on Jan 8, 2010

    8) I loved this poem..unique and lovely piece. Thanks for sharing. cheers 8)

  • Paul Roberts on Jan 9, 2010

    Heartfelt Bro. heart felt. Friend, fan, smile

  • stryka66 on Jan 9, 2010

    That’s a really heart-rending piece – identify with you !

  • Christine Ramsay on Jan 9, 2010

    A very emotional and well written piece.

    Christine

  • Juancav on Jan 9, 2010

    Excellent read,well expressed feelings.

  • Aldrin A Wilding West on Jan 10, 2010

    From the heart as always. Good write.

  • Butterfly Musings on Jan 24, 2010

    A bittersweet tragedy to linger in love unreturned, truly captivating!!

  • Valerie Keller on Feb 13, 2010

    I truely enjoyed reading this. Thank you for that.

  • Versatile Artist on Feb 24, 2010

    A very emotional piece but was well writen I have to say.Your last line”of all the mistakes I ever made,lovin you was the worst’ hit home with me in my heart.Been there did that and doesnt want to do it again.

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