Feelings for someone who has been there for you. Grateful for the support that has been shown. You love this person so much for what they have done for you.

Extreme are my feelings.

More real than real.

From my past

you have allowed me to heal.

I feel you.

I hear you.

Everything that you are,

I consider myself a part of.

That’s the way of love.

Yes, I do.

I love you.

I knew that you would be

the one to be true.

In my mind’s eye

I dream of you and me.

We are walking the beaches in the sand,

and walking the trails on dry land.

All that I do,

I want you there too.

My heart would have failed

to thrive if you had not 

helped me to feel so alive.

No comfort anywhere could I derive.

I get faint as your smell

precedes you into a room.

I am like a flower

that has just become in bloom.

Nothing is more precious to me.

You are flawless as anyone can see.

I have been waiting all of my life

for a treasure as you.

I don’t know what I would do

if all of a sudden you were gone from me.

I believe I would die

from a broken spirit

and shy away from reality,

not able to live or be.

If I could not feel your presence

in sharing the very same air,

I would suffocate

from the lack of oxygen

that had been sucked from me.

I would wither into a

pit of nothingness.

You are what gives me life.

Loving you frees me from strife.

I have peace for the first time

and things are sublime.

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  • Sweet girl on Jan 27, 2010

    Nice post.

    Thanks to share this one.

    Pakize..

    I’ll be very happy if you read my latest article about Cyprus.

    http://trifter.com/europe/cyprus/travel-guide-welcome-to-cyprus/

  • Aldrin A Wilding West on Jan 27, 2010

    Wonderful….

  • Oversoul on Jan 27, 2010

    THIS IS BEAUTIFUL…READING IT PUT A SMILE ON MY FACE…BECAUSE IT SORT OF SOUNDS LIKE SOMETHING I WOULD WRITE…BRAVO!!!

  • jimbob1 on Jan 28, 2010

    DB…a very powerful, emotional and passionate work of literary art that conveys some pretty strong feelings about this individual. This is yet another in the growing file of poetic masterpieces that you have produced. Congratulations on continuing to produce and present such outstanding work. I Like It and I have voted accordingly. Thanks and keep on sharing the great literary talent you possess.

  • Nitin Mudgal on Jan 28, 2010

    Thanks for post.

  • Midie on Jan 30, 2010

    Great touch of emotion

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