Let the age of mental lethargy be attacked by the bolt of reason.

An abode of knowledge

Knowledge of life

Life in the fast lane

Lane leads to strife

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Strife is the way of life

Life is but a choice

Choice defines outcome

Outcome you rejoice

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Rejoice, do the good

Good is but the truth

Truth- not beyond the sky

Sky for you is always blue

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Blue, seem many of you

You, how often do ’think’?

Think‘ and figure out ‘how‘?

How often you do blink?

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  • sanaahmed on May 6, 2011

    lovely word good one

  • Martin Kloess on May 7, 2011

    good work!

  • CHIPMUNK on May 7, 2011

    good one

  • Krupali on May 7, 2011

    Thanks ya all! :)

  • mona rastogi on May 7, 2011

    great one

  • Krupali on May 7, 2011

    thanks Mona

  • Abee.A on May 15, 2011

    nice poem!

  • Imran on May 16, 2011

    marry me, Krupali

  • jamilhussain on May 18, 2011

    nice post

  • Krupali on May 18, 2011

    Who are you, Imran? lol

  • Imran on May 18, 2011

    I’m a 25-year old Bangali, but i’ve been in the U.S. since I was 6.

    I was hoping to make fun of your poems, but I ended up enjoying them a lot.

    Are you really in India?

  • Krupali on May 18, 2011

    Hoping to make ‘fun’ of my poems? Why? This is crass!

  • Krupali on May 18, 2011

    And yeah I’m in India

  • Imran on May 18, 2011

    I gave up on poetry a long time ago. I saw that most people’s poetry was too simple and meaningless.

    But yours has pleasant phonetics, nice rhythm, and wonderful meanings.

  • Krupali on May 18, 2011

    Thanks. Why don’t you join triond & share your poems?

  • Imran on May 18, 2011

    I have no poems to share, sister. The things I see and feel, they’re hard to translate into words.

    I gotta head off to school now, but I’ll be back later to chat with you, if you don’t mind.

    Take care.

  • Imran on May 18, 2011

    Hi.

    Here’s my email address: wstan25@yahoo.com

    Send me an email if you get the chance.

  • Krupali on May 19, 2011

    No. Sorry, haven’t any time to waste on strangers. But aren’t you someone I already know? You know what I mean. You’re not Imran right?

  • Krupali on May 19, 2011

    BTW where exactly do u stay in US?

  • Imran on May 19, 2011

    I am in Los Angeles.

    You and I don’t know each other, and I am Imran. That’s my real name.

    I found your profile completely by accident, and you seemed like someone I just had to become acquainted with.

    There was a lot I wanted to know about your experiences in India. I hope you change your mind.

  • alxymy on May 31, 2011

    I did love that poem it was very nice.

  • Elove Poetry on Jun 16, 2011

    well… nice words… and for the India thing…. i guessed right…. the way u ‘talk’…. gives u away……….. but quite great poems u have there

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