Passionate imagery.

it burns me 

hot

ouch

dripping

sticky

sweet

smell

groans

whisper

soft music

smiles

writhing

sweat

heart beat

pounding

rhythm

grind

pace

clasp

ascend

surrender

frenzy

wet

soft

descend

warm

flushed

exhale

silent

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  • 13/7 on Jun 4, 2011

    Very rarerly is the passion of sex captured in such vivid and honest terms. This is the most artistic potrayal of passion I have ever come across. There is no doubt within me that if ever I had to experience the full potential of raw passion with anyone, it would be with the writer of this piece (assuming ofcouse that the writer is a woman as I am not one :) )

    13/7 xxxx

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