Are they bad or not?

Most people loves party

But definitely not a third party

We say they’re bad

But some say be glad

For that very third party,

Shows that you guys aren’t meant to be.

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  • alc on Dec 22, 2009

    Loved this one! Thanks for sharing!

  • Will Gray on Dec 22, 2009

    Great!

  • Darla Smith on Dec 22, 2009

    Very good poem!

  • diamondpoet on Dec 22, 2009

    Nice write.

  • Snooky on Dec 22, 2009

    Took me a minute but I got it, Cool!

  • Eunice Tan on Dec 22, 2009

    Great thought from you

  • wonder on Dec 23, 2009

    Quite clever.

  • Starpisces on Dec 23, 2009

    well done Jane… some even have 4th or 5th party (joking)…

  • Leonardo da Vinci E. on Dec 23, 2009

    Apparently, one has to “read between the lines” to get at the meat of this poem and that\’s a novel approach.

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