Perhaps Lord will forgive one on breaking fresh,new heart and for
breaking already broken heart He will never forgive.
This is my December and me alone again.

Some memories struck with winter

recalling them and my body is silent as graveyard.

Rain in December like ice melting

and shedding tear drops.

My life clouded with sorrows like

roads and hills coffined with angelic white snow.

These black nights smiling and

fog draping around me.

Wearing necklace of tears as they roll,

same sky blesses with snowflakes and

I wonder it’s giving me company.

I ramble across that lake

and daily see someone loving

and my body get fire,

while he promised to stay by my side forever,

but I was wrong to believe him.

I thought he is trying to open my life’s door,

so I may breath but I never imagined he ,

wanted my left breath as well.

Oh!love you made my head bend

and I’m feeling guilty,my only sin

extended that I loved you

and in return you murdered my faith.

I never asked you for jewels,

Neither I want car nor money from you

I just needed little love and support,

you thought it’s too much.

Was I flaw in your life?

As you ignored me every day.

Am I whore?

After all I told you everything about me.

Was I dummy for you?

It seems you mocked me and on my condition.

Isn’t it funny as the year ending

you ended this story as well.

Love hurts because you wounded my

already pierced body.

Cold winter heeling my fired burning wounds,

as it understands me better but

the pangs of pain will remain same:(

Is there anything else to find?

will some body take me home?

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  • Anbuselvan on Dec 11, 2011

    good one

  • CutezSoNia on Dec 11, 2011

    thanks for sharing. i like it!

  • khoziru kun on Dec 11, 2011

    awsome

  • bolive on Dec 11, 2011

    great share!

  • Iqra Baloch on Dec 11, 2011

    :( …………ill always b dere wid u aushi……it really touched da deeeeeeeeeeeeeeeepest pat of m hrt!
    il allllllllllllllllllllllwayzzzzzzzzz b dere 4 u……….

  • Budy236 on Dec 11, 2011

    Interesting.

  • Angelji on Dec 11, 2011

    I can relate and feel your pain too dear ! No Never you are not a whore ,maybe he….you’re adorable am so sure of it..Lets just laugh with this kind of people ,one day they will be in our shoe then the pain they will feel is more than triple than us…yoooo cheers Glo….You take care :)

  • stonecutter on Dec 11, 2011

    great poem. thanks

  • Aroosa Gloomy on Dec 11, 2011

    @Iqra balouch by reading ur and @ Angeji\’s comment few tears rolled down my cheeks that someone cares me.Thankx u both 4 understanding this reality of mine.

  • misterdd on Dec 11, 2011

    aroosa will be better, now you are stronger and smarter, so you can find better people. smile and be happy

  • ragnarok1992 on Dec 11, 2011

    Great poem.

  • megamatt09 on Dec 11, 2011

    Sound words.

  • Martin Kloess on Dec 11, 2011

    An irony with no solution.

  • ittech on Dec 11, 2011

    Feeling guilty kitty puck
    That i loved youand in
    Murdered my faith caught chuckhole
    You for jewels i want gland
    Money from apses contraband
    Needed little love and sucker
    Its too much i car plucker
    Your life you ignored cool
    Day i whore all i cool spool
    Everything about cyst
    Dummy for you seems deaf midst
    Me and on my excursion

  • tnvrstar on Dec 12, 2011

    Beautiful Poem. Indeed you have got the talent to become a poet

  • Iqra Baloch on Dec 12, 2011

    well dats the truth which u never ever can regret…….. never ever 4 me !
    :(

  • Iqra Baloch on Dec 12, 2011

    @ aangelji …………wooooooooooow u are really an angel!!just started u luvin after this comment!

  • trionny on Dec 12, 2011

    find another man, dear…
    don’t be too sad :)

  • ittech on Dec 12, 2011

    My soul unclear with regrets like

    roads and hills coffined with saintlike white-hot snow.

  • ittech on Dec 12, 2011

    beautiful thanks for this

  • bryan21764 on Dec 12, 2011

    Great poem. Let you feelings out on your posts/blogs/articles and allow those feelings out of you and all will be well with time.

    “Remember to look at the world not only for what it is, but also for what it can be.”

    Bryan

  • nurzaira on Dec 12, 2011

    aroosa don’t be sad.. keep smile and happy.. beautifull pict

  • FX777222999 on Dec 13, 2011

    Sad and hurt.

  • AINIEE on Dec 13, 2011

    awesome and very nice:)

  • ChuzNul on Dec 13, 2011

    I like this picture

  • ittech on Dec 14, 2011

    interesting post

  • tonyleather on Dec 14, 2011

    Such pain in one so young

  • KittyK on Dec 14, 2011

    You words made tears in my eyes; you are never alone! We have to endure some pain in life to find the happiness which is just beyond…never give up-life is one lesson after another and we all are very strong; beyond our imagination…

  • mdrkarim7 on Dec 14, 2011

    AS good as ever..

  • Rose that grew from concrete on Dec 14, 2011

    This is great, so well expressed! You my black rose will grow once again and be loved like you should be, We are taught and repeat the same mistakes in life in life until we learn from them. I’ve learnt that the hard way.You have to cut yourself off from ll the hurt and start again, believe in ourself. You are unique. soon you will see. The good thing about poetry is that you get to turn a negative things that happen in to a beautifully written poem :)

  • Lovely Phu Phu on Dec 14, 2011

    I liked the picture :)

  • thetoplad on Dec 14, 2011

    hot pictures!

  • girishpuri on Dec 14, 2011

    very deep , very emotional

  • realityspeaks on Dec 14, 2011

    Emotive and soul stirring

  • tnvrstar on Dec 14, 2011

    beautiful poem

  • erwinkennythomas on Dec 14, 2011

    good imagery, moving and rather sad

  • dazzlejazz on Dec 14, 2011

    Filled with such sorrow and pain.
    Here’s hoping the new year brings new love.

  • mtrguanlao on Dec 14, 2011

    Felt the pain in your poem. The pain will pass,don’t worry.

  • Yvhes P. on Dec 14, 2011

    you’re really a great poet. I like it!

  • lovinglyoursjuny on Dec 14, 2011

    Another touchy and emotional write up here :(

  • J L Carey Jr on Dec 14, 2011

    You are a very creative spirit and I am glad that I have stumbled upon your work. Love the pics you have with the poem also.

  • PHILLY DREAMER on Dec 14, 2011

    Aww to sad. next time someone tries to pluck you from your bush. Prick them with your thorn

  • Eliza26 on Dec 14, 2011

    Beautiful poem.

  • theworkoutgeneral on Dec 14, 2011

    good poem

  • stuart747 on Dec 14, 2011

    A great poem told from the heart, keep it up

  • Ruby Hawk on Dec 14, 2011

    Never let a man walk over you. Give him the boot. He’s a loser.

  • MJRapp on Dec 14, 2011

    Bleak. I love it. But Ruby is right. You don’t need a guy who doesn’t appreciate you!

  • ilikep2s on Dec 15, 2011

    nice one!

  • notcar99 on Dec 15, 2011

    I feel cold suddenly..lol..Your poem have a very deep meaning..and I know it must be a very good poem.I’m afraid I don’t have the ability to understand very well this kind of poem..hehe..But I can feel it in my heart..huhu -)

  • Aroosa Gloomy on Dec 15, 2011

    @notcar99 yu yu hu hu haha ho ho ho.u still didn’t 4 get this way of laughing?I thought u did:)

  • pattiann on Dec 15, 2011

    Very good poem. You are a wonderful, talented individual. Don’t ever forget that.

  • nurzaira on Dec 15, 2011

    beautifull poem dear.. again here :)

  • Joe Ram on Dec 15, 2011

    oh nice one.

  • sheilanewton on Dec 15, 2011

    As ever, your poetry is stunning and your images are wonderful. In this poem, my two favourite lines are:

    Rain in December like ice melting

    and shedding tear drops.

    WOW!

  • ImKarn23 on Dec 15, 2011

    The words you choose to use at your age are incredible, my friend! Cheer up,be proud, love yourself – you have so much to offer!

  • Paula Ponce on Dec 15, 2011

    awsomee !! very awsomee !!!

  • ittech on Dec 16, 2011

    awsome rite up thanks

  • holly the chef on Dec 16, 2011

    Good poem. Don’t worry about the guy. I once, when I was younger had my boyfriend call my mom and told her to tell me he does not want to see me anymore.
    Beautiful pictures. You are a creative talent, any guy who would not want you is an idiot.

  • vijayanths on Dec 17, 2011

    awesome poem.

  • lonelyplanet on Dec 17, 2011

    Fantastic poem.

  • Abudzar alghifari on Dec 17, 2011

    nice pict

  • Giovanis Sandi PutraLucifer on Dec 17, 2011

    wow

  • ittech on Dec 17, 2011

    interesting

    thanks for share

  • ittech on Dec 17, 2011

    thanks for informative post

  • ImKarn23 on Dec 18, 2011

    just reading once again, dear…

  • girishpuri on Dec 18, 2011

    again there.

  • ittech on Dec 19, 2011

    nice

  • RetnoWidya on Dec 19, 2011

    good thankx

  • whoisbid on Dec 20, 2011

    keep doing this

  • V rank on Dec 21, 2011

    You have the thing playing with words..

  • straw1979 on Dec 22, 2011

    nice work like always

  • Fika Thiana on Dec 22, 2011

    Very touching. I can understand the meaning of your writing. You’re a great writer. Looks like I need to learn from you, in you don’t mind. :)

  • Thell Stars on Dec 22, 2011

    nice picture

  • vickylass on Dec 23, 2011

    This is a beautiful poem and I liked the pics chosen. Thanks for sharing.

  • Aroosa Gloomy on Dec 23, 2011

    @Fika Thiana.Poetry is not thing to learn it’s all just what your heart says.I’m not poet.I just write what my heart says:)

  • girishpuri on Dec 23, 2011

    i like it

  • nurzaira on Dec 24, 2011

    good talent.. :)

  • AmosTheCat on Jan 3, 2012

    I have missed some of your pieces so I am trying to catch up. You say you are not a poet, and that you just write what is on your heart. What is on your heart seems to walk and talk not only like poetry but like beautiful poetry to me. You have a way of controlling the mood of the poem from explosive anger born of betrayal to a kind of sweet feminine melancholy that maybe only women can fully understand. And you do it all by manipulating images so they just flash before the eyes of the reader’s mind, forming a coherent body of thoughts, like the individual frames of a movie film combine linearally to form a coherent artistic statement. If you are not a poet then I am hardly a human being.

  • HannanRKhan on Jan 29, 2012

    V. interesting, thanks a lot for sharing

  • Vinaya says good bye on Jan 29, 2012

    I’m getting to know you

  • xphantoms on Jan 29, 2012

    nice image

  • William C. Jefferson on Jan 29, 2012

    This is very heartfelt and sincere.

  • CutezSoNia on Jan 30, 2012

    great share!

  • Sonm Man on Jan 31, 2012

    Nice share

  • tr10nd3rs on Feb 1, 2012

    great articles

  • CHIPMUNK on Feb 5, 2012

    your work is one of the best in my opinion

  • lucia anna on Feb 12, 2012

    I agree with CHIPMUNK

  • HannanRKhan on Feb 12, 2012

    I like it

  • nita kusuma dewi on Feb 15, 2012

    i like it

  • Nes on Feb 17, 2012

    loved this! and the pictures are pretty too!

  • dodolbete on Feb 21, 2012

    beauty in sadness… marvelous ^_^

  • sapna the dream on Feb 27, 2012

    too good………

  • CutezSoNia on Mar 3, 2012

    very good……………

  • VV on Mar 29, 2012

    keep it up :)

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