Great connection between girlfriend and boyfriend.

Usually it is heard that breakup between boyfriend and girlfriend. I want to share a poem which can connect to both. The main thing of this poem is that when a boyfriend/girlfriend attend the phone of each other then one line is speak by boy and in response of that the another consecutive line is speak by a girl and the process goes on.

And the poem is :-

boy :- i kiss you on the bed girl :- i feel shy boy :- i kiss you on the door. girl :- i will fly

1
Liked it
Comments (11)
  • akalinik on Jan 16, 2011

    i like it :)

  • Wizard Brown on Jan 16, 2011

    Nice. Look forward to reading more of your work :)

  • Stable on Jan 16, 2011

    Short and sweet. Well done, lovely poem

  • UncleSammy on Jan 16, 2011

    Nice share

  • SowmyaT on Jan 17, 2011

    nice

  • john smither on Jan 17, 2011

    The importance of having a good connection, good writing.

  • CHIPMUNK on Jan 17, 2011

    great work

  • Geny on Jan 17, 2011

    Thanks for sharing

  • albert1jemi on Jan 17, 2011

    Nice share

  • gaby7 on Jan 18, 2011

    Interesting!

  • gaby7 on Jan 24, 2011

    Nice work!

Leave a Comment

Hi there!

Hello! Welcome to Authspot, the spot for creative writing.
Read some stories and poems, and be sure to subscribe to our feed!

Find the Spot

Loading