What inspired me to compose this poem was a lovely lady who happens to be sitting right next to me when I was having lunch the other day. Well, I wasn’t able to seduce my way to her, but she gave me some sort of adrenaline boost that afternoon. Chances are slim that we might see each other again so I decided to translate what I felt during those heavenly 15 minutes that she was only a few inches away from me.

This can’t be true

The very first time I saw you

I don’t know what to say

I don’t know what to do

One things for sure

I can’t take my eyes off you

To me you are like Helen

And I would give up Troy for you

I would travel not knowing where to go

Hoping I would end up right next to you

How unbelievable what love can do

Specially for someone like me who had fallen for you

How can I deny what I feel for you?

When everybody seems to know that my heart belongs to you

Even though you might answer with a hurtful “No”

I would still pursue my feelings for you

That is how deep, my love for you.

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Comments (18)
  • papaleng on Dec 2, 2011

    Ah! that was so cute. Like it much.

  • vladimire popovski on Dec 14, 2011

    Thank u papaleng.

  • realityspeaks on Jan 6, 2012

    Beautiful…

  • vladimire popovski on Jan 6, 2012

    Thank you realityspeaks.

  • lxdollarsxl on Jan 6, 2012

    its cute, and comes from the heart which makes it better.

  • vladimire popovski on Jan 7, 2012

    Am glad you liked it lxdollarsxl.=)

  • erwinkennythomas on Jan 7, 2012

    wonderful

  • Judy Sheldon on Jan 8, 2012

    If it is meant to be, you will meet again.

  • juliachild on Jan 12, 2012

    Nice share

  • ittech on Jan 18, 2012

    well written

  • Kristie Claar on Jan 25, 2012

    Nice work!

  • mdrkarim7 on Jan 26, 2012

    That is how deep, my love for you.

    This is true.

  • Lisa Marie Mottert on Jan 26, 2012

    Very good…put alot of heart into this poem:)
    Thanks, for the share!

  • Nidhi Rai on Jan 26, 2012

    Very nice share.

  • girishpuri on Jan 31, 2012

    i hope she would meet you again and shall say ‘ i miss you too’….lol

  • Dora77 on Jan 31, 2012

    Smashingly Beautiful…..

  • LCM Linda on Jan 31, 2012

    Beautiful poem. Well-expressed.

  • ittech on Feb 14, 2012

    Beautiful!

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