This is What I Remember of You

Fatema on Feb 21, 2010

Tags: lost love, reminiscence

In Reminiscence of lost love.

You were riding your bike and murmuring things
You think a lot is what I thought
This is what I remember of you

I waved at you , You smiled at me
I forgot all about the prank
I planned to play on you
This is what i remember of you

I sat on your bike
And held you tight
I asked if it was alright
And your lovely tone of voice
You assured me that I’ve got it right
This what i remember of you

Down at the sunset point
We sat close to each other
The sun pierced my eye
You devised a way , You devised it well
You made me rest my head of you
This is what I remember of you

You caught my hand
And I caught yours
I barely managed to leave it then
This is what I remember of you

At theatre
In that dark place
I caught your hand once again
The movie went on
And you kissed my hand
This is what I remember of you

At the end of the night
I placed a kiss on your cheek
And you jumped in glee
That moment will last forever with me
This is what I remember of you

When you dropped me home
You came close to me and said
Come and give me a hug at least
This is what I remember of you

All I try to forget is your
No longer with me ,
Your no longer with me
Even in my head .

Fatema

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TheWriter14 on Feb 22, 2010
Wow, that is good! well done, really….really deep, ok, If I share your articles on facebook, twitter, will you share mine?
Fatema on Feb 23, 2010
yeah sure …but how do u do that ??
aniket on Feb 23, 2010
awesome i was just hoping for a happy ending though but i forgot its fatema’s poem always a twist.
Fatema on Feb 24, 2010
yes soo many people tell me that … ” its fatema’s poem always with a twist ” heheh

thank you
Fatema on Feb 24, 2010
yes soo many people tell me that … ” its fatema’s poem always with a twist ” heheh

thank you
NishaMeledath on Feb 26, 2010
Wow… there it is… you leave us unprepared for the ending.. Nice writeup..
NishaMeledath on Feb 26, 2010
Wow! there it is. you leave us unprepared for the ending. Nice writeup.
Fatema on Feb 26, 2010
thank you nisha , ur comments make me happy
RAJEEV BHARGAVA on Feb 28, 2010
hi fatema,

i am reading your very first publication and i\’m already hooked onto it. i took an instant liking to your writing style. every verse is so interesting. it\’s like reading a story and full of suspense and in the end there is that wonderful twist, just like i do in my works. thanks very much for sharing this wonderful poem. i LOVE it!!!
RAJEEV BHARGAVA on Feb 28, 2010
hi fatema,

i am reading your very first publication and i\\\’m already hooked onto it. i took an instant liking to your writing style. every verse is so interesting. it\\\’s like reading a story and full of suspense and in the end there is that wonderful twist, just like i do in my works. thanks very much for sharing this wonderful poem. i LOVE it!!!
Fatema on Mar 1, 2010
thanks so much rajeev , u’ve made my day!
Silent Wasp on Mar 1, 2010
Fatema, i i\’ve become a fan of your poetic skill! With each and every piece, you uphold the complexity and beauty of your words. Just lovely.

Thanks so much for a great read…again!
Fatema on Mar 1, 2010
hey thanks a lot !
Sushant94 on Mar 2, 2010
damn i didnt discover u earlier! ur a great writer! this is one of the best i read!
Fatema on Mar 2, 2010
yeah i joined one week back
Cynthia Cox on Mar 2, 2010
You do dance your style at every twist. I never know what to expect or who the characters will reveal theirself to be in the end. Keep writing lady because you make even dark appear nice in your poetic writes~
Fatema on Mar 3, 2010
lol thank you , im never satisfied with an expectd ending , i guess its not me , and i dont have in mind what the twist will be , i just write and find out myself , funny but true
RAJEEV BHARGAVA on Sep 30, 2010
i came back to re-visit this page and re-read this wonderful poem of yours, fatema. it’s really beautifully worded and such a brilliant way to launch your writing career. it’s really hard to single out one best poem as all your works are equally beautiful in their own way. i just love them all. thanks for sharing.

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