I had written this poem when I was 12, so I hope readers would not be too critical of it.

I had written this poem when I was 12, so I hope readers would not be too critical of it.

This shall be my life.

When I am young and grown and strong

Surely successful but I’ll do no wrong

When failure or anger comes along

I’ll calm myself

I’ll sing a song.

People may praise me high and low

Or insult me and show me the door

That will not matter anymore

For love can make friends of a foe.

When I walk the lonely path of life

Where surrounds me grief and strife

I hope I won’t meet any on the way

For when the sun was shining I would have made my hay.

Where I walk I’ll leave my charm

I hope it does well, no harm

And when I pass a beautiful farm

I’ll spare some time to watch a swarm.

When on my death bed I’ll lie

I’ll consider it my life’s high

If only my lord would call me soon

To see heaven’s morn before it’s noon.

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  • rexaniel on May 5, 2009

    Thanks for this article,
    I’ve learned a lot.

    Regards,
    Rexaniel

  • ladybaby on May 15, 2009

    There is a lot of wisdom in this poem for being written by a 12 year old. I like it very much.

  • friendshipter on Oct 29, 2009

    wow.. deep.

    check this out..
    http://authspot.com/thoughts/smile-d/
    Happy reading :-)
    Plez recommend.
    Thanx, zahmbeina {0D}

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