Where’s the money…

Woke up this morning

With a smile on my face

Knowing that today was payday

Thinking about all the things I

Could do today, because their is

Money in those beautiful ATM machines

So, I get dress, skip breakfast, head out

The door, still smiling, had no clue, I was

Heading into the ATM nightmare zone

First stop, long line, second stop, machine

Out of order, third stop, machine would

Not except card, fourth, fifth and sixth

Stop, machine down for service, no time

For a seventh stop, as I am late for

Work and penniless

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Comments (18)
  • joyhyena29 on Feb 18, 2010

    well done^^

  • chellsy on Feb 18, 2010

    great great post my friend

  • AlmaG on Feb 18, 2010

    This is a fun poem :) I can relate to it haha!

  • drelayaraja on Feb 18, 2010

    Nice and funny poem. Liked it.

  • Val Mills on Feb 19, 2010

    Lol! I can remember how life was even worse before ATM machines. Good one.

  • sureshkumaras on Feb 19, 2010

    Its makes me LOL

  • alensmith on Feb 19, 2010

    thanks well done
    great work

  • alensmith on Feb 19, 2010

    You deserve, your best of all post.thanks for sharing it to me.

  • johnnydod on Feb 19, 2010

    They can be a pain, but there nice when they pay out double .. never happened to me yet but I can wait lol

  • sambhafusia on Feb 19, 2010

    good one..

  • albert1jemi on Feb 19, 2010

    nice share

  • qasimdharamsy on Feb 19, 2010

    Very Nice piece….well done…

  • Lady Sunshine on Feb 19, 2010

    lmao! Funny piece, Shirley. Though twice my ATM card got stuck in two different locations. That was not funny.

  • seema1962 on Feb 20, 2010

    Delightful poem

  • devsir on Feb 20, 2010

    great poem
    I liked it
    Good one

  • Ruby Hawk on Feb 20, 2010

    I can’t stand ATMs and never use them. nice poem.

  • standingproud on Feb 21, 2010

    oh Shirley have had a day just like this,bloody machines lol.

  • subhashlaxmin on Feb 25, 2010

    excellent

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