Now what description to give you about this poem…It is my best work….and it talks about something very very important… a universal problem that confronts all of us….

Those Gardens of Roses

Every time I walk through that muddy road,

They always seem to carry their beautiful, heavy load

Black, Purple, Yellow, White, Pink, and of course, Red.

They gleam with the dew in the “morning spread” (=rising sun)

Oh! Those gardens of roses.

Can a thing so beautiful,

Remain without being troubled?

Every year people came, and their offers only doubled

It was just the gardener’s grit that he never succumbed

Grit, honor, character don’t give bread and butter, honey!

Leave all that …. To live, you just need money…..

Now, on those lands

Stands a marvel of modern architecture

And I bet it has a rosy texture…..

It’s so fine; it’s so tall, awesome to the hilt….

But still they lie, crushed, below its built…

They bloomed, they gleamed

Now unseen, now unheard…

Those gardens of roses, will they be remembered?

Still I pass through the “same subway route”

But lost are those lovely gardens of roses………

                                                                                    Faisal.

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Comments (12)
  • Darla Cooke on Oct 16, 2009

    Interesting poem.

  • K.Reshma on Oct 16, 2009

    lovely poem

  • cutedrishti8 on Oct 16, 2009

    Great poem GD

  • Shirley Shuler on Oct 16, 2009

    A very beautiful poem and I can feel your love of nature in your writing!

  • Mythili Kannan on Oct 17, 2009

    Great feel and thought

  • Tanya Wallace on Oct 17, 2009

    Loved it!Both beautiful and creative write!From what I have read of your work so far you are a terrific poet!

  • wonder on Oct 19, 2009

    Such beauty—crushed. Sad.

  • wonder on Oct 19, 2009

    Such beauty—crushed. Sad.

  • Somnolent on Oct 19, 2009

    nice poem, add me and read my articles please

  • T.Rex McGoogle on Oct 20, 2009

    I enjoyed your poem very much. Well written. You have a lot of talent.

  • fishfry aka Elizabeth Figueroa on Oct 23, 2009

    That was so well written, so real and yet very sad. Where there was farms and large landscapes now are structures built higher and higher, leaving mother nature no room to grow and blossom.

  • fishfry aka Elizabeth Figueroa on Oct 23, 2009

    That was so well written, so real and yet very sad. Where there was farms and large landscapes now are structures built higher and higher, leaving mother nature no room to grow and blossom. Awesome

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