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Thoughts 10pm on Sept Five

Cynthia Bartlett on Sep 6, 2011
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I couldn’t sleep this was going through my head.

Lavender

Lace

Faith misplaced

 may all find peace

in their hellish place

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  • Will Dee on Sep 6, 2011

    I get mixed reaction as I read this piece. I not sure whether I feel happy or sad. However, I think I am leaning toward sadness. This was a very short but interesting piece.

  • VoIP on Sep 6, 2011

    I think I agree,
    with Will Dee,
    whether to be,
    a bit happy,
    or just morn for thee?
    *
    It was interesting and well done…

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