Thoughts

rutherfranc on Jul 24, 2009

Random thoughts.

And I never thought

That the skies can be more blue

But it seemed more azure

Everytime I think of you

And the twighlight more romantic

As the sun turns the clouds pink

and rays reflected in the water’s wave

As the golden globe do sink…

And I never thought

That a whisper can be so sweet

as your fresh breath breezes

where my ears and face do meet

Makes me wish for your kisses

like I crave for the sweetest treat

Just as a soda pops and hisses

Quenching thirst from unbearable heat…

And I never thought

that I will feel all of this

all of twenty three years

So this is what I miss

And I never thought

that I can have this bliss

Now give me what I sought

and reward me with a kiss…

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Comments (19)

Dr Curtis Barnett on Jul 25, 2009
I loved this, it really painted a great picture!
Deep Blue on Jul 25, 2009
Truly rewarding. Nice poem kabayan, your wife would be truly honored.
princess serenity on Jul 25, 2009
How cute
Anna Storer on Jul 25, 2009
Truly beautiful.
RS Wing on Jul 25, 2009
True Romance there brother. Really soft and fluid like your reflections. Well crafted and real poetic command. Great prose man. A+
Kairos on Jul 25, 2009
it’s been a while.but then again, you are worth waiting…
papaleng on Jul 25, 2009
Welcome back Mr. romantic.. I miss your nakakaantig na mga poems!
Mr Ghaz on Jul 25, 2009
Wonderful!..that was really unique and lovely poem..nice words too..I liked it. Thanx for sharing this magnificent piece..welcome back.
maranatha on Jul 25, 2009
How beutifully written!
clay hurtubise on Jul 25, 2009
Awww, such a softie!
Nice job.
Thanks,
clay
S A JOHNSON on Jul 31, 2009
Very beautiful
cebuana on Aug 1, 2009
another beautiful piece!
LOVELYHONEY on Aug 2, 2009
on her behalf
..——-..——–..======xxxxxxxxxxxxsssssssssss

23 one for each year MISSED
lh on Aug 6, 2009
perchance i clicked again

i did not know how hot or thoughful were u..
Amanda N Miller on Aug 13, 2009
Great piece.
Sourav on Aug 22, 2009
Nice romantic poem. A good write.
K Kristie on Aug 30, 2009
sweet…
friendshipter on Sep 1, 2009
LOVE IT!!!!
Leonardo da Vinci E. on Sep 3, 2009
Romance and appreciation is on the prowl in this poem.

Hi there!