Thoughts that were racing through my mind that I needed to get out of my head.

The wind is howling

I’m still awake

Thoughts racing through my mind

Trying to escape

It’s cold outside

I can hardly breathe

All I really need

Is to get some sleep

Friends are hurting

I can’t find the words

All I can say

Is trust in the Lord

You may not like his answers today

But it has always been His way

You can choose to argue with Him

But before you do, know you will never win

The Father knows best for His children

Trust in His plan

One day you’ll walk beside Him

And finally you will understand

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Comments (23)
  • KittyK on Dec 16, 2011

    Your thoughts are so very true…

  • vijayanths on Dec 16, 2011

    Meaningful thoughts

  • phillies on Dec 16, 2011

    very true and wonderful

  • girishpuri on Dec 16, 2011

    deep thoughts , touched.

  • Kristie Claar on Dec 16, 2011

    Thank you all for reading and commenting. God Bless!

  • Martin Kloess on Dec 16, 2011

    Very good.

  • incredible hunk on Dec 16, 2011

    thought in your mind, and thought in my heart, …..

  • ragnarok1992 on Dec 17, 2011

    Nicely written.

  • Kristie Claar on Dec 17, 2011

    Thank you Martin, incredible hunk and ragnarok1992 for reading and commenting. God Bless!

  • Avik Chattopadhyay on Dec 18, 2011

    verry well expressed

  • Angelji on Dec 19, 2011

    Yes ..the Father knows whats best for ur children..

  • Budy236 on Dec 19, 2011

    Very good poem. It reminds me of a prayer.

  • Kristie Claar on Dec 19, 2011

    Thank you Avik, Angelji, and Budy for viewing and commenting on my work. God Bless!

  • prsol46 on Dec 20, 2011

    Nice work, keep it up!

  • Kristie Claar on Dec 21, 2011

    Thank you prsol. God Bless!

  • shelpeare on Dec 29, 2011

    Very nice. God can also help us to make a POEM out of every “PrOblEM.” In our darkness He is a “light” to our “heavy” hearts.

  • Kristie Claar on Dec 29, 2011

    @shelpeare – That is an awesome message! Thank you for your insight! God Bless!

  • realityspeaks on Jan 9, 2012

    Excellent share

  • Kristie Claar on Jan 10, 2012

    Thank you realityspeaks

  • PaulB on Jan 20, 2012

    Thanks for reminding me how NASTY windy weather is!

  • Kristie Claar on Jan 25, 2012

    Thank you for reading and commenting PaulB, God Bless!

  • dwisuka on Feb 1, 2012

    great one

  • Kristie Claar on Feb 2, 2012

    Thank you dwisuka!

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