Thoughts Off a Tree

Eric Mendoza on Aug 13, 2008

Tags: creative writing, Discovering, grassy fields, longing, nature, random, Thoughts

Feeling like Isaac Newton when he discovered gravity.

I long to lay in a green, grassy plain,
Away from the city and loud overhead planes.
A place to gather and pick up my thoughts,
So they’re not left there on the ground to rot.

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Anna Storer on Nov 18, 2008
YEP! And most of us feel the same way.
Lovely verse.
goodselfme on Nov 30, 2008
I know what you speak of my friend.
Michael Stonecipher on Jan 25, 2009
The ones that rot will be reborn in spring
so the kindhearted souls can pick them up again:)

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