A poem…

Thoughts rush in
And swirl around
A flurry of activity
That never make a sound
Dreams and wishes
Invade the space where
Daily duties abound
They join together and
Stand forever
Creating hope that is
Most profound…

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  • Mys Lyke Meeh on Nov 23, 2008

    Simple, quick yet meaningful!

  • BC Doan on Nov 23, 2008

    My favorite lines: “Dreams and wishes
    Invade the space where
    Daily duties abound”

  • Nick Kenney on Nov 23, 2008

    Thank you Mys and B.C. just simple thoughts yet such a sweet release to be putting them down in print again…

  • Naomi Joyce Lewis on Nov 23, 2008

    I like the way you expressed this one and it is often that way in life. Ma

  • PR Mace on Nov 23, 2008

    Great way with a poem. Very meaningful. You know you got me into trying more poems. You should read my last two. So happy you are back. I will sent you a message later, Pam

  • Darlene McFarlane on Nov 24, 2008

    Short, sweet, and to the point. Nice message, Nick.

  • R.B. Parsley on Dec 18, 2008

    Nick,
    Loved it much! It shows your back in form again. Loved the message!!! Fantastic!!!!!! Hope to be reading one of your new animal stories soon!!! Take care buddy & message me soon!!! Want to know what you been doing all this time!!! Mary asks if I’ve heard from you quite often.

    Tell Jan Hi for us and give her our love.

    Again, Excellence at its best!!!!!!!!!! Fantastic poem!!!!!!!!

    Randy

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