The reality of love and pain; loving touch could be deceiving and sorrowful.

Through and Through

 

Through and Through

                Those words came into

Through and Through

                Those eyes I wanted to meet

Through and Through

                We move along and fleet

Through and Through

                Those words spoken of

Through and Through

                Warmth of our hearts speaks

Through and Through

                Our hands hold and assert

Through and Through

                Our lips touch and desert

Through and Through

                My heaven’s weep

Into the night of cliff

Stairway of anguish

Gripping into the sorrow

Nighthawk of Tomorrow

 

 

 

               

 

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Comments (12)
  • PSingh1990 on Sep 10, 2010

    Nice Share.

    :-)

  • Christine Ramsay on Sep 10, 2010

    You have expressed those feelings so well. A lovely piece.

    Christine

  • V rank on Sep 10, 2010

    nice illustration…

  • Lord Banks on Sep 10, 2010

    Lovely poem with a great picture well done! LB

  • LoveDoctor on Sep 11, 2010

    There is a lot of truth in this poem: the reality of love. very well expressed.

  • Percy on Sep 11, 2010

    Nice one. Through and through, a word that will tell it all.

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Sep 12, 2010

    Ugh, that really went through!

  • Joseph Scott on Sep 13, 2010

    Powerful piece.. well-written and I liked the format you chose :)

  • mysocalledlife on Sep 13, 2010

    you made it through our hearts with this poem! another great one!

  • Lipstick on Sep 14, 2010

    what a brutal representation of a broken heart (^_^) but goes well with ur beautiful poem

  • T. S. GARP on Sep 16, 2010

    Good poem on love gone bad. :)

  • reciel tanaid on Sep 24, 2010

    through and through …. nice one…

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