Through The Storm

richard reed on Aug 18, 2010

Some thoughts are made to stay fresh,and others are made to dissapear…..

In my mental thoughts

war stories ink stain the mental

a passionate melody from my heart beat,becomes the instrumental

to the words never told on paper

but yet a victim to my finger, pounding the keyboard

putting in print, verses to a script

tighter than a loaded gun

with the hand on the grip

ready and shoot

but the barrels curved

gripping the thought but killing the nerve

to ever stay dry

Through the storm

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Comments (11)

Joie Schmidt on Aug 18, 2010
Nice work.

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Joie Schmidt.
Ranjan Mathews on Aug 18, 2010
Keep the powder dry
And shoot, or try.
Katie Marie on Aug 18, 2010
Powerful writing my friend.
melphens on Aug 19, 2010
i’m amaze my friend, nice work!
ashan1614 on Aug 19, 2010
Writing is an emotional outlet for many of us. Sometimes it is to make us think more deeply about things that are going in our lives; other times so we can “vent” and let go.
Likha on Aug 19, 2010
The highs and lows of this poem make it unique. Nice.
giftarist on Aug 19, 2010
Intense write, mate. Great!
Emilia Romano on Aug 19, 2010
beautifully written
S J Dickens on Aug 20, 2010
a good one.. thanks for sharing.
Shalom
GodsGrace on Aug 21, 2010
Brilliant Poem
Renee Hudson on Sep 24, 2010
I like it. As you once told me, keep your head up. Things always will take a turn for the better.

Hi there!