Is it the rain or tears showering from the eyes of God??

Darker the clouds gathering up in the sky,
the mountains seems to turn foggy,
the wind started blowing to their full force,
sudden the thunderstrike shaked me.
Is it the awareness before the rain?
Or might be God’s angry with His people?
I felt a drop on my face,
Is it the rain or God’s crying on His creations’ fate?
The wind that blowed,
turned to a storm,
as if God’s regretting for what he has done.
For creating the world, and his people in it,
who made this world a gutter to reside in.
Or may be it’s nature’s step for a change!
one side full of beauty,
the other like a revenge.

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Comments (12)
  • jaysonv on Dec 30, 2009

    great post..thanks for sharing.

  • wonder on Dec 30, 2009

    Deep and meaningful with vivid descriptions.

  • TS Lewis on Dec 30, 2009

    Great write. A flood that washes sin away

  • upeshdaa on Dec 30, 2009

    fantastic , great.

  • choosiest on Dec 30, 2009

    good work, creative, imaginative…thanks for sharing

  • metro7 on Dec 30, 2009

    Your poems have layers of meanings nice one kid.

  • Sourav on Dec 30, 2009

    Liked your imagination. Different perspective of rain. Well done!

  • Goodselfme on Dec 30, 2009

    Your double ideas fit so well in this lovely written piece.TX

  • Karthikeyan on Dec 30, 2009

    Great One !! Thumbs Up :)

  • albert1jemi on Dec 31, 2009

    beautiful poem

  • fashion girl on Jan 1, 2010

    This beautiful poem is very emotional and moving ….

  • Anupam Kachroo on Jan 12, 2010

    nice..

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