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Lightning flashes,

Thunder booms:  sudden rise

Of my blood pressure.

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  • Justfer on Sep 8, 2009

    Bulls-eye! I can relate to this very much!

  • lindalulu on Sep 8, 2009

    I love thunderstorms!

  • Grace Kathryn on Sep 8, 2009

    I may watch from a safe place; never have liked loud noises. Cover my head and take a nap is a better idea.

  • Yovita Siswati on Sep 9, 2009

    thunderstorms scared me too sometimes! Great work.

  • skylite on Sep 13, 2009

    Well Said !!

  • OhSugar on Sep 18, 2009

    I live in Florida, so lately we have them daily. I don’t mind them so much if I am indoors.

  • odessa on Oct 2, 2009

    bravo!

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