Perfect classic touch to the poem. Good share.

I find it fascinating.

That was fabulous Shakespearean lines, Lisa. I lost my sense of logic but I am thy servant to serve this comment. Well done.

interesting piece. good job

A poem written (hopefully) in old English…don’t worry it was all foreign to me too.
Lillyrose I loved this

The lady doth protest too much, methinks.

I know I have comments and likes on this, so why are they not here????

Old English poetry for me is saturated in romanticism I’m not too familiar with the earliest stages of the English language ~ but you sure know how to express a deep human experience and make it sexy and exciting Lilyrose

I treasure the early English style and language as celebrated by great writers such as Shakespeare in his sonnets, esp 116.Loved your poem lily

very nice^^

Miss L…there is something to be said about the poetic way a person gets to write and to read ye olde English…I think you did a great job in attempting to resurrect a long lost art and of course I voted that I like it…even with all the thees, thys and thous there is no mistaking the erotic message of this piece “Thou will contentedly take thy wet seed between thy thighs”…Great job…Thank you

or…”Thou wilt contentedly take thy wet seed betwixt thine thighs”

Great, you can write!

Great poem, I like it.

“Take thee as if thy life depends, over and over, until spent” my favorite line…very good write

The old english adds a charm to the lovely poem.

That wasn’t an easy task but you made a very good job of it and poduced a wonderful poem at the same time. Well done.

Christine

Well, I don’t know if all the old English was correct but it was certainly hot. lol

A nice outcome! Inspiring thoughts on how to make poetry.

very nice one….

Very nice, and well laid out Lilly, I enjoyed your old English.
Cheers.

Very interesting poem.

nice one!

very interesting, but I am scratching my head very hard….
(ehem.. cough… cough….)
LOL…

Thy perfect little write

Good post and I think I’ll leave it at that, but don’t you think your playing with fire.

Thou poetry caresses thy heart. Masterfully written on a seductive topic.

“Thou will contentedly take thy wet seed between thy thighs”

Nice one Lisa. I’m pinching the above for a chat-up line.

I enjoyed this poem!

It is strange to read a peom from a different time and place. I did not understand everything but it was an interesting read. Thanks for sharing.

Thanks for sharing, great job.

Old English can be really cool. And I do like Shakespeare so I am used to these ancient words;)

But it was so much fun back when I first learned English and I was having a difficult time trying to understand Metallica lyrics. It is one thing to write poems in this fashion but why a metal band would try this is really beyond me.:)

Old, new…English is English Well done!

This, that, thine thee,thou – and the other, all rolled into a very self abusive poem.
Nice work – if you can get it Lilly.hehe.

Very evocative language. Reminds me of Chaucer.

It’s so beautiful…

it is thou the coolest poem in old english.