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Tick Tick Tick…
Time is just a blur
a whirlwind of memory
Hopeless, tragic, imagery
an endless sleep, I’ll never stir

Tick Tick Tick…
Hear their laughter in your ears
a dagger through your heart
The flow of salty tears
let the ending finally start

Tick Tick Tick…
Turn away from love
nothing matters anymore
You soul releasing like a dove
just open the closet door

Tick Tick Tick…
There hangs death
a simple, sadistic noose
Around your neck exhale your last breath
Close your eyes, all hell breaks loose

Tortured cries from within are ceased
just a lifeless body, a spirit released.

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  • daring104 on Aug 1, 2009

    This is very nice, keep writing! :)

  • George W Whitehead on Aug 2, 2009

    Nice one, Lene.

  • ken bultman on Aug 2, 2009

    A poetic insight to the ticking clock of finality well described.

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