A cute poem. Time does tend to slip away from you without you realising it.

Christine

Well put,and an excellent read.Your fan,smile

Short, sweet & profound. Something we all experience but have never so succinctly put into words.
Thanks fer that one! bravissima!
-Cheers.
-D.

Very nicely done!!!! I really like your picturesque description!

Beautiful imagery, and so true, it’s always slipping away

i am a TIMES STAR TOO now nice knowing u
lh

Hello Annie, I enjoyed reading this piece, fluent, creative

Great job..nice little poem.

Lovely metaphor of all the ways we deal with time. Beautiful.

cute.. with a good lesson to boot..

lovely piece.

Lovely poem!

Very wonderful write! Great piece!

wow—I liked this…wonderfully put…

Beautiful imagery. You’ve painted such a picture with your words.

Brings “hold on to the moment” to the forefront of my mind… a great expression that highlights the power and swftness of time

Good short poem. You expressed the precious value of time so well with this piece. Time tells all. well done.

I see why you looked at my ‘Time’ poem. Like your view of it. Intersting descriptions I liked
useless now,
but pretty, with vague oil swirls of memory
floating and escaping, running away,

You write very well, your feelings come through to the reader,Thank you,F J.

Beautifully written poem, I like this a lot.

Nicely written

Nice poem

So unique, interesting and captivating – nice work!

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.